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中考英语作文热点预测附优秀范文12篇

一、双减政策

1.充足的睡眠对儿童的成长至关重要。如今越来越多的人意识到睡眠的重要性。面对学习压力和睡眠问题,我们应该怎么做呢?请你根据提示以“Having

Enough Sleep for Children”为题写篇英语短文,并给出解决办法。

要点提示:

调查

·10000名10到15岁的孩子每天睡眠少于8小时。

·一些孩子11点睡觉,7点起床。

注意:

1.短文应包括所有要点提示,可适当发挥,行文连贯;

2.词数:80-100(文章开头已给出,不计入总词数)。

3.参考词汇:survey调查;sleepless 失眠的

Having Enough Sleep for Children

Sleeping is very important to the growth of

children.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

【答案】例文

Having Enough Sleep for Children

Sleeping is very important to the growth of children. We did a survey

about it.

There are 10,000 children between the ages of 10 and 15 who sleep

原因

·学校内竞争激烈,课后花更多时间学习。

·来自家庭和学校的压力让他们失眠。

less than eight hours per night. Because competitions in school are

fierce, and more time is spent studying after class. Some children go

to bed at 11 o’clock and get up at 7 o’clock. That is because the

pressure from family and school makes them sleepless.

In order to solve the problems, students should try their best to

finish their schoolwork as soon as possible. Schools should decrease

the pressure on students and encourage students to take part in more

outdoor activities. Parents should help children keep a balance

between studying and relaxing.

【详解】

1.题干解读:本文是一篇材料作文。要求以Having Enough Sleep for

Children为题,结合表格内容进行写作,注意要点要齐全,可适当发挥。

2.写作指导:写作时要以第三人称来介绍,时态主要用一般现在时。作文可分为三段,第一段引出话题;第二段介绍调查的结果及原因;第三段分别从学生、学校和家长三方面给出建议。要保证语言连贯,无语法和拼写错误。

二、家庭作业量与睡眠管理

2.如今,学生都感到压力倍增,如何减少压力,调整好状态是大家都关心的。请你根据以下内容谈谈目前学生的压力并提出你的建议。

现象

建议

要求:1. 必须包含所有要点,可适当发挥,语句通顺连贯。

2. 书写工整,书面整洁,短文80-100词左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数。

Nowadays, students feel really stressed out.

______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________作业太多;功课难度加大;没有足够的休息时间;

……

.......(至少3条)

____________________________________

【答案】参考范文:

Nowadays, students feel really stressed out.

Students have too much homework to do every day and the schoolwork

becomes more and more difficult. They will spend more time finishing

it. Sometimes they have to stay up late so they don’t have enough

time to sleep. Some students always worry that they can’t pass the

exams. Some students can’t listen to the teachers carefully in class.

Some students can’t get on well with others.

In my opinion, it’s not necessary to take the stress too seriously.

Because it’s normal to feel stressed out for everyone. They should

talk about the problems with their parents if they get into trouble.

Maybe it’s also a good way to share their problems with their close

friend. They can take part in some sports or activities and have

enough sleep to keep healthy.

【详解】

1. 题干解读:本文是一篇材料作文。本文的写作要点是谈谈压力的主要来源及缓解压力的方法。作文首句已经给出,写作时注意内容的衔接。

2. 写作指导:本文主要采用第一人称来展开写作,辅以第三人称。时态使用一般现在时为主。文章要紧扣题目要点,围绕主题,准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等。语言的表述要符合语法结构。层次要分明,条例要清晰。

三、课后延时服务

3.假如你是鹏城中学的李华,外教Mr. white想了解学校最近推行的“课后服务”情况,请你根据以下表格信息回一封邮件。

时间 内容

自主做作业,老师来辅导

星期一至五

16:30-18:00

课外阅读和各种社团活动

体育锻炼

体会

在校完成作业,放学后做自己喜欢的事情

有利于发展兴趣特长……

增强体质,身体越来越好……

要求:

1.80词左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数内;

2.文中不得出现真实姓名和校名;

3.可适当增加细节,以使条理清楚、行文连贯;

4.标点正确,书面整洁。

Dear Mr. White,

The after-school activities are well liked in our school.

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Have a nice day!

Yours,

Li Hua

【答案】One possible version:

Dear Mr. White,

The after-school activities are well liked in our school. We can have

kinds of activities from 16:30 to 18:00 between Monday and Friday.

First, we are supposed to do the homework by ourselves and the

teachers will help us with it. After finishing homework at school, we

are able to do what we like doing. Second, further reading and a

variety of clubs are also offered in our school. In this way, we can

develop the interests and hobbies. Finally, it is good for us to do

sports because it makes us stronger and healthier.

All in all, the after-school activities are popular in our school and

I believe we will have a more meaningful and colourful school life.

Have a nice day!

Yours,

Li Hua

【详解】

1.题干解读:该题是一篇材料作文,主要围绕课后服务这一话题,向外教讲述学校课后服务的时间,内容和体会,内容可以适当发挥。

2.写作指导:本文应该用第一人称来叙述内容;时态采用一般现在时为主;讲述课后服务的内容时,注意条理性,可以使用相应的顺序连词或介词短语;描述课后服务的体会时,可以使用原因状语从句;叙述要完整,且保证条理清晰。

四、加强体育教育

4.作为一名已参加过体育中考的毕业生,你对中考体育考试也一定有自己看法和做法,请你为学校网站写一篇稿件,与七八年级的同学们分享你的心得。内容包括:

你认为今年汕头中考体育考试满分提高到40分好吗? 为什么?

你或你的同学之前在体育考试备考中的具体做法。(至少两点)

呼吁七八年级的同学们重视体育锻炼,为体育中考做好准备。

作文要求:

1.不得照抄原文;不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称和学生的真实姓名。

2.语句连贯,词数80个左右。 作文的开头已经给出,不计入总词数。

As we all know, the full marks of the P.E. test for Junior 3 students

in Shantou are 40 points this year.

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_______________________________________________________________________

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【答案】As we all know, the full marks of the P.E. test for Junior 3

students in Shantou are 40 points this year. This is good for

students. We will exercise more so as to stay strong and healthy

because of this new policy.

Take me as an example. In order to get good grades in the P.E. test,

I listened to the teacher carefully in the P.E. class, and did

everything as the teacher showed us. What’s more, I made plans to

get enough but not too much exercise, about thirty minutes every day.

I also ate and rested properly to make sure that I had energy all day.

My suggestions for Grade Seven and Eight students are as follows.

First, you’d better pay great attention (attach great importance) to

the physical exercise. Second, don’t wait until you are in Grade 9

to begin exercising! Make good use of your time to get ready for your

PE exams now!

【解析】

试题分析:这是一篇话题作文。本文题材紧扣学生学习生活,使学生有自我发挥的空间。动笔前要认真审题,深入挖掘话题内涵,不可遗漏要点,并适当发挥。行文时要注意人称、时态的搭配及主谓一致问题,同时适当使用连接词,注意上下文联系紧密,符合逻辑关系。

【亮点说明】这篇短文内容涵盖了题目要求的所有要点,表达准确,意思连贯,符合逻辑。在文章的结构组织上很好地使用了简单句和复合句,使文章自然流畅。同时,使用了大量的常用的句式和短语,如:as we all know、be

good for、so as to、take me as an example、in order to、get good

grades、did everything as the teacher showed us、What’s more、make

sure、had better、pay attention to、make good use of、get ready for以及序数词first、second等,这为文章增色不少。学习中注意积累,牢记一些常用句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理。

考点:话题作文。

五、加强艺术教育

5.中国结是中国特有的民间手工编结艺术,具有独特的东方特色。请写一篇短文向来自美国的交换生介绍中国结。

历史

历史悠久,出现在古代,在唐、宋初发展成为一种艺术形式,明、清开始流行

多以红色为主,因为红色代表好运 颜色

用途

用作装饰品(decoration),可挂于房屋、汽车、手机等不同的地方

中国各地可见,备受人们欢迎。 现状

……

……

参考词汇:中国结Chinese knots

A special form of traditional art—— Chinese knots

Chinese knot is a special form of Chinese traditional

art.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

【答案】例文:

A special form of traditional art—— Chinese knots

Chinese knot is a special form of Chinese traditional art and

they have a unique oriental characteristics. They have a long history. The history of Chinese knots dates back to

ancient times. It is said that they were developed into an art form in the Tang and Song Dynasty and later became popular in the Ming and Qing Dynasty.

Colorful thread is used for tying the knots. However, the most commonly used color is red because it stands for good

luck and prosperity. They can be used as car or mobile phone decorations. People often hang those beautiful knots in

rooms or cars to decorate them. Young people also like

Chinese knots which they use as mobile phone decorations.

Chinese knots can be seen in different parts of China. They are popular among the young and the old. But I hope it can

be loved by people all over the world. I hope he can bring good luck

to all the people in the world.

【详解】

1. 题干解读:文章属于材料作文,主要是向美国的交换生介绍“中国结”的一些事情。包括历史,颜色,用途等信息,主要是把表格所给的内容描写清楚,最后可以自己再发挥一些。

2. 例文点评:文章主要分三段描述。第一段总述“中国结”是中国传统艺术的一种特殊形式以及追溯其历史;第二段主要描写“中国结”的颜色和作用;第三段主要描述“中国结”深受中国人的喜欢,也希望能够让全世界的人们喜欢并给他们带去好运。整个文章结构严谨完整,语言表达准确,意思明确通顺易懂。

3. 高分亮点:

短语:a form of;date back to;be used for doing;stand for;all

over the world。

句型:and引导的并列句;because引导的原因状语从句;which引导的定语从句。

六、研学旅行

6.

近期,你校将举行英语演讲比赛,题目为A/An ________ Study Trip。请根据表格信息,完成一篇英语演讲稿,谈谈你今年已经参加过的研学之旅、感受以及对本次研学活动的看法。

注意:

(1)将短文标题补充完整;

(2)短文必须包含所有要点,并适当拓展;

(3)文中不得出现真实的人名和校名;

(4)词数100左右。

A/An ________ Study Trip

Time

Weather

Transportation

Place

Activities

Bus

Ningbo Museum

●…the history of Ningbo…

● …(至少补充2点)

Feeling

Opinion

________________________

【答案】

An Educational Study Trip

Ladies and gentlemen, my topic today is an educational study trip.

On March 21st, I went to Ningbo Museum with my classmates by bus. It

was sunny but cold. In the museum, I saw beautiful Chinese paintings

and learned the history of Ningbo. At noon, I tasted some Ningbo food.

It was delicious. Besides, I took some photos to keep the wonderful

memory. The trip made me very excited.

In my opinion, I really like the study trip. I not only had great fun,

but also learned something useful. All in all, it was an educational

study trip.

Thank you.

【详解】

1.题干解读:本文是一篇演讲稿,以“A/An ________ Study Trip”为题参照表格中要点进行分析。写作时需包括表格中的全部要点,并适当发挥。

2.写作指导:本文以第一人称为主,时态以一般过去时为主,注意动词过去式的正确书写;写作时注意分段叙述,第一段开门见山,介绍演讲稿的主题;第二段介绍研学的时间,天气,交通方式,地点,活动等内容;第三段介绍对这次研学的看法和感受;保证文章条理清晰,语句通顺。

七、心理健康

7.作为中学生,我们现在的学习压力很大,经常面对各种考试,因此有时会产生焦虑情绪。请你根据内容提示,简单描述一下我们的考试压力主要体现在哪些方面,并针对此种情况给出合理的建议。

提示:

1、表现:担心考试;考前很难入睡;考试时发挥失常……

2、建议:请从考前学习准备、作息时间和放松方式这三方面,给出至少四条缓解考试压力的具体建议。

要求:

1、观点鲜明,结构合理,内容连贯,要用到所有提示内容,并适当发挥;

2、文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息;

3、词数:80词左右,文章的开头已经给出,不计入总词数。

How to Deal with the Exam Stress

We students are very busy with schoolwork and in the face of many

exams every school day. Some of us

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【答案】例文:

How to Deal with the Exam Stress

We students are very busy with schoolwork and in the face of many

exams every school day. Some of us are so worried about exams that

it’s hard to fall asleep before them. When we pay much attention to

the exam, the test results won’t be good. Parents and teachers will

blame them, they will also lose confidence. If we have proper stress,

we can work harder, but if we have too much pressure, it may have a

bad effect on our study. We should learn to release pressure.

First of all, we should review carefully and make full preparation

before the exam. Second, we shouldn’t stay up late to review for the

exam. Third, after reviewing for a period of time, we should also

relax ourselves appropriately. In addition, if we do well in the exam,

we will give ourselves appropriate rewards.

So I hope everyone can deal with the exam stress properly and get

good grades.

【详解】

1. 题干解读:题目要求根据提示内容,写出考试压力的表现,提出自己的建议等,可以适当的发挥,写作时要运用正确的英语表达,要选用恰当的词汇和短语。

2. 写作指导:写作时要与已给出的开头融合起来,用第一人称和其他人称相

结合来写作,时态以一般现在时为主,多用情态动词should提出建议,要做到要点齐全,无单词拼写和语法错误。

八、劳动教育

8.为落实国家教育部提出的对中小学加强劳动教育的实施意见,你们学校安排了丰富多彩的劳动教育活动。假如你是李华,你的英国笔友Linda对你参加的活动很感兴趣,她发来邮件想了解有关情况。请你根据以下提示,给Linda回一封邮件,内容包括:

1. 劳动的重要性;

2. 具体活动:做家务、志愿者活动……;

3. 你的看法。

注意:

1. 词数100左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;

2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;

3. 不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。

相关词汇:劳动 labor

Dear Linda,

I’m glad to hear from

you.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours,

Li Hua

【答案】例文

Dear Linda,

I’m glad to hear from you. Recently my school has arranged rich and

colorful labor education activities. I know you are interested in it,

so I’d like to tell you something about it.

Labor is important for students. It can help students develop the

habit of independence and learn to do many things by themselves. I

often do housework at home when I am free. I help my mother do the

dishes and take out the trash. I also help clean the house. Besides,

there are some volunteer activities, such as clean up the park, pick

up the rubbish and so on.

I think these activities are good for us. We not only experienced the

pleasure of labor, but also made a lot of friends.

Yours,

Li Hua

【详解】

1.题干解读:这篇作文要求学生们以李华的身份给Linda写信,给她介绍学校安排的劳动教育活动。内容应包括:劳动的重要性;具体的活动:做家务、志愿者活动及你的看法。学生们可以此为根据,补充细节信息,并用正确的英语进行表达。

2.写作指导:审题可知,这篇作文应用第一人称、一般现在时和一般过去时叙述,注意谓语动词的正确形式。写作时应注意将题目中规定的内容都包括在内,不要遗漏要点;注意英语句式结构和汉语的不同,以简单句结构为基础,穿插并列句、复合句以及其他复杂句式,提升作文档次。同时注意上下文的衔接,使文意连贯。

九、手机进校园

9.现在,许多学校禁止学生把手机带进校园,包括寄宿学校。对此大家看法不一,有些人认为,此举不妥,手机方便和父母保持联系,也可以上网搜一些学习信息,很方便。但是,有些人持赞同态度,手机上信息太多,游戏太多,影响学习。对此,请你发表自己的看法。词数90词左右。

Should students be allowed to use smart phones at school?

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【答案】例文:

Should students be allowed to use smart phones at school?

These days, more and more students have their own smart phones.

Should students be allowed to use smart phones at school?

Some people believe that students can take their phones to school.

They think parents can get in touch with their children at any time.

And students can do useful things by phones. It’s very convenient.

However, some people disagree that. They say smart phones can make

students pay little attention to their study. They say some students

often play computer games on that.

In my opinion, it’s OK to have smart phones at school, but school

must have rules about how to use them correctly. Smart phones can be

great help if they are used properly.

【详解】

1.题干解读:现在,许多学校禁止学生把手机带进校园,包括寄宿制学校。在大家看法不一的情况下,请发表一下自己的看法。

2.写作指导:本文是发表自己的看法的文章,所以本文的时态主要以一般现在时为主,人称主要使用第三人称;陈述赞同使用手机的理由反对使用手机的理由,最后发表自己对在学校使用手机的看法;保证内容完整,结构清晰条理。

十、习惯养成教育

10.难忘的初中生活即将结束,回顾这段时光,相信你在许多方面取得了不少进步,比如,生活技能的获得、学习方法的掌握、良好习惯的养成…… 请你根据自己的经验,以“How can we have a successful middle school life?”为题,结合以下要点与即将步入初中的学弟学妹们谈谈如何成功地度过初中生活。

提示:1. 学习方法上的建议。

2. 与老师、同学融洽相处的方式。

3. 与父母之间的沟通。

4. 生活及身体健康方面的提示。

要求:1. 短文中应包括不少于上述三项内容,可适当增加细节。

2. 语言连贯,语法正确,书写规范。

3. 文中不得出现真实的校名与人名,词数在60-80词左右。

How can we have a successful middle school life?

Hi, everyone! I have something to share with you.

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【答案】Possible Version 1:

How can we have a successful middle school life?

Hi, everyone! I have something to share with you. As we all know,

it’s important to have a healthy, happy and successful middle school

life. Here are my opinions on how to do it well.

First of all, we are supposed to learn to study wisely. Listen to the

teacher carefully in class, and take notes carefully. If there is

something difficult that you can’t understand, you should talk to

your friends and teachers often, and try to get help from them.

Getting on well with your classmates will make you have an

unforgettable memory. Treasure the valuable friendship. What’s more,

we should communicate well with our parents, who love us most. Tell

them about your thoughts and feelings. Last but not least, it’s

necessary to have good habits. You’d better go to bed early and have

enough sleep. It will keep you active during the day. Doing exercise

and eating healthy food are also important.

Well, all in all, I hope all of you have a successful middle school

life.

Possible Version 2:

How can we have a successful middle school life?

Hi, everyone! I have something to share with you. I will go to high

school this year. The middle school life means a lot to me. Now I’d

like to talk about my experience in my middle school life.

First, you should learn about some good ways to improve your

schoolwork. You should listen to the teachers carefully in class,

finish your homework in time and correct your mistakes in your

homework. Don’t give up easily and you will get good grades at last.

Second, you need to make friends with your teachers and parents. They

will help you out when you are in trouble. Don’t be afraid of

telling them about your problems. They may sometimes be strict with

you because they love you and hope you will become good children as

well as good students. You should learn to communicate with them well.

Finally, you must be healthy and strong in order to continue your

study and life in senior high school. So doing sports is also very

important. Learn to have good habits and eat healthily. I hope you

will have a successful middle school life in next three years.

【详解】

1.题干解读:该题目是写一篇记叙短文,要求根据要点与即将步入初中的学弟学妹们谈谈如何成功地度过初中生活,短文开头已给出,可适当发挥。

2.写作指导:本文主要采用第二人称来叙述;时态上以一般现在时为主。写作时可适当使用一些副词和连词,注意上下文联系紧密,符合逻辑关系,结构清晰,表达具有条理性。

十一、食品安全

11.“一粥一饭当思来之不易,半丝半缕恒念物力维艰”,勤俭节约是中华民族的优良传统,即使我们现在的生活条件有了极大的提高,我们也不应该浪费粮食。假如你是李华,你所在的学校英语校报专栏向全体学生征稿,主题是

“节约粮食”。请你根据以下提示,写一篇应征稿。

1. 食物提供给我们每日所需能量,美食使人心情愉悦。

2. 浪费粮食的现象随处可见,如家庭、校园食堂、餐馆等。

_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文

It is well-known to us that saving food is very important. Food

provides us with our daily energy, and good food makes us feel good.

However, in our life, we can see people throw away the clean food to

dustbins or people order too much food in restaurants without packing

the leftovers home. Wasting food not only wastes a lot of money but

also pollutes the environment.

As teenagers, we should develop good habits to avoid wasting food.

When you order food at a restaurant, don't order too much. Remember

to finish your food. If you can finish all of it, you should take

home what is left. What’s more, you can also make posters to call on

others to save food. Everyone can help to prevent food waste.

【详解】

1.题干解读:本文是一篇材料作文。这篇作文要求根据题目中给出的提示,讲述节约粮食,题干中给出了写作的提纲,这给学生们的写作提供了思路,学生们可以此为依据,再补充细节内容,用正确的英语表达出来。注意要点要齐全,可适当发挥。

2. 写作指导:本文主要采用时态主要用一般现在时。写作时要认真审题,根据本文内容,列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达;然后紧扣要点,动笔写作;可以围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等;语言的表

述要符合语法的结构,造句应该符合英语的表达习惯;层次要分明、条理要清晰。

十二、保护视力

12.

由于青少年的近视问题越来越突出,为此,学校将举办有关“爱眼日”的英语演讲比赛。请根据下表内容,写一篇英语演讲稿,分析青少年近视的成因问题............并提出合理建议。

.......Let’s protect our eyesight!

Problems

● study for a long time

● spend time on phones

● …

要求:

(1)短文必须包括所有要点,并适当发挥;

(2)文中不得出现真实的人名和校名;

(3)词数:100个左右。

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【答案】例文

Dear friends,

Have you found that more and more students are wearing glasses?

The main reason is that students spend too much time on playing

phones or watching TV. Some students may have wrong positions such as

reading in bed or reading in sun. Others may study for a long time

and don't have a rest.

Advice

● take a rest after…

● do eye exercises

● …

To protect our eyesight, students can take a rest every two hours

when they are doing homework or watching TV. Second, it is important

for students to do eye exercises twice a day. Finally, students must

develop good habits, for example, sitting straight and never reading

in bed.

Everyone should play a role in protecting our eyesight.

【详解】

1.题干解读:题目要求是根据表格内的信息,围绕“Let’s protect our

eyesight!”为主题,写一篇英语演讲稿,分析青少年近视的成因问题并提出合理建议,需包含表格中所给的所有要点,词数100左右。

2.写作指导:首先要认真审题,看清题目中的要求和要点,围绕主题展开作文;在写作中要注意谓语动词的时态,以及人称与数的变化;本文时态主要为一般现在时,人称以第一人称为主;在表达意见和建议时,可使用情态动词。表格中已列出相关要点,用正确的英语把要点表达出来,可适当发挥。然后紧扣要点,动笔写作,在写作过程中,要注意主谓一致等问题,不要出现语法错误;要保证语句通顺,意思连贯,逻辑合理。最后要细心检查,确保正确无误。


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