[经典]七年级英语作文及范文(50篇)

初中英语作文题目及范文解读

1．口语课上，外籍教师Mr．Jordan 要求大家互相交流What do you usually do on

weekends？What did you do last weekend？请根据下面提示，写一篇发言稿．

Activities

（活动）

Usually on Weekends

1．do homework

2．Help to do housework

3．Sometimes go shopping

……

Last Weekend

1．Visited grandparents in the

countryside

2．……

……

Feelings

（感受）

要求：（1）发言稿需包含表中所有内容，并可作适当拓展；

（2）语句通畅，书写规范，注意时态、大小写字母和标点；

（3）文中不得出现自己真实姓名、班级和校名；

（4）词数60左右，开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数．

Good morning，class．I'd like to tell you something about my weekend activities．On weekends

I usually ．

That's all．Thanks for listening．

【分析】【高分句型一】

I usually spend lots of time doing homework．我通常花大量的时间做作业．

spend…doing sth花费…做某事．

【高分句型二】

I think it's really boring．

我觉得这很无聊．

I think+宾语从句．

【解答】Good morning，class．I'd like to tell you something about my weekend

activities． （点题）On weekends，I usually spend lots of time doing homework． 【高分句型一】And I also have to help my parents do some housework．Sometimes，I go shopping with

my sister in a supermarket．I think it's really boring．（周末的活动和感受）【高分句型二】But last week，I did something different．On Saturday，I went to visit my grandparents in the

countryside．They were happy to see me and cooked a lot of delicious food for me．On

Sunday，I went boating with some friends．We had great fun playing with water．What an

interesting weekend it was!（上周的活动和感受）

That's all．Thanks for listening．

【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务．

2．你的睡眠习惯是怎样的？是早睡早起的morning people， 还是晚睡晚起的evening

people？请以"A Morning or Evening People？"为题，根据所给表格提示，写一篇短文，谈谈

你对养成良好睡眠习惯，保持身体健康的认识．文中不得出现真实的人名和地名，词数不得少于80个词．

A Morning or Evening People？

写作提示

Beginning

Body Part

提示词

your sleeping habit

different ideas

sleeping habits

your parents' sleeping habits；

go to bed； get up； sleeping

hours

reasons

enough sleep； healthy body

Ending

______________________．

【分析】【高分句型一】

They say there's not much sleep for them at their ages．

他们说在他们这个年纪没有多少睡眠．They say后使用了宾语从句，宾语从句用了there be句型．

【高分句型二】

Many studies show that it's much healthier to go to bed early and get up early．

许多研究表明，早睡早睡更健康．Many studies show 后使用了宾语从句，宾语从句使用的句型是It is +adj．+to do sth．

【解答】

A Morning or Evening People？

Different people have different sleeping habits． Some are morning people， some are evening

people．（不同的人有不同的睡眠习惯）

My parents are morning people． They go to bed early and get up early． They say there's not

much sleep for them at their ages．【高分句型一】As for me， I never stay up late． I often go

to bed before 9：00 pm， and get up early for school the next morning．（我和父母亲都早睡早起）

I think everyone should have good sleeping habits． They can help our bodies relax and rest

well． Many studies show that it's much healthier to go to bed early and get up early．【高分句型二】I prefer to be a healthy morning people．（好的睡眠习惯的好处）

【点评】首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作，在写作过程中，要注意句与句、段与段之间的过渡，必要时可适当运用表示转折、因果、并列、比较等关系的连词，使文章过渡平稳，自然流畅；同时注意语句要通顺，词汇书写无误，不要出现语法错误．最后要细心复核检查，确保正确无误．

3．假如你叫李华，你和你的美国朋友Linda经常通过邮件谈论各自的学校生活．她知道你们学校每年都会组织一些外出旅行，比如去植物园、参观科技馆等．她想知道你本学期最

有趣的一次旅行是什么？你去了什么地方？做了什么？有什么感受？请你根据她提出的问题回复邮件．

提示词语：visit，see，do，learn，happy

To：Linda

From：Li Hua

Subject：The most interesting school trip

Hi!Linda，

I'm glad to hear from you．

Yours，

Li Hua．

【分析】高分句型一：

That's the most interesting trip because I did a lot of physics experiments by myself．

句中"because I did a lot of physics experiments by myself．"为"because"引导的原因状语从句，这句话意为：那是最有趣的一次旅行，因为我自己做了很多次物理实验．

高分句型二：

I was very happy that I learnt a lot during the trip．

这句话句式为"be+形容词+that 从句"，"that I learnt a lot during the trip．"在句中做宾语成分．这句话意为：我很高兴这次在旅行中学到了很多．

【解答】Hi!Linda，

I'm glad to hear from you．At my school we have a lot of school trips every year．Last month

we went to the Science Museum．That's the most interesting trip because I did a lot of physics

experiments by myself．【高分句型一】（交代最有趣的一次旅行）It was amazing to do

something with your hands instead of only watching or listening to others．I also visited the

Natural World in the museum and it was amazing．The Science Museum is a wonderful place for

young people．I was very happy that I learnt a lot during the trip．【高分句型二】（介绍这次旅行）

Yours，

Li Hua

【点评】写作文时要注意平时语言的积累，避免出现语法错误，写作时注意条理清楚，语意通畅．

4．题目①

假如你是李华，你们学校的健身俱乐部要举办一场健身经验分享活动，你打算邀请你们班

交换生 Peter 参加。请用英语写一封电子邮件，告诉他活动的时间和地点、活动安排，以及他需要做什么准备。

提示词语：fit，share，invite，experience，question

提示问题：● When and where will you have the activity？

● What will you do？

● What do you advise Peter to prepare for it？

Dear Peter，

How is it going？

There 'll be an activity on"How to Keep Fit"in our school.__________.

I'm looking forward to your early reply.

Yours，

Li Hua

【分析】【高分句型一】

I'd like to invite you to take part in the fitness experience sharing activities in our school health

club at 14：30 next Monday.我想邀请您参加下周一14：30我们学校健身俱乐部的健身经验分享活动。

would like to do sth想做某事。

【高分句型二】

I suggest you get some knowledge about fitness first.我建议你先了解一下健身知识。

I suggest+宾语从句。

【解答】Dear Peter，

How is it going？

There 'll be an activity on"How to Keep Fit"in our school.I'd like to invite you to take part in the

fitness experience sharing activities in our school health club at 14：30 next Monday.【高分句型一】（时间和地点）It is the most popular event liked by everyone.（做什么）To hold it

successfully，we have done a lot of example，we will invite some fitness

experts to give a 's more，I will be the host of the event.I suggest you get some

knowledge about fitness first.【高分句型二】（建议）

I'm looking forward to your early reply.

Yours，

Li Hua

【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。

5．假定你是李平，请阅读以下邮件并回复。内容包括接受请并询问至少三个相关细节（如课程安排......）。

注意：

1.词数80左右；

2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Li ping，

I am happy to welcome you here as an exchange you can come，you will study in

our school from June 5th to July it OK with you？And you can ask me any question about

the reply in writing to this letter by May 26th .

David Smith

Principle of Jefferson Middle School

Dear ，

.

Yours，

Li Ping

【分析】【高分句型一】

Before I go,I want to know about the course arrangement so that I can prepare in advance.在我走之前，我想知道课程安排，以便我能提前准备。so that 为了

【高分句型二】

Looking forward to hearing from you.期待您的来信。look forward to期待

【解答】Dear ，

I am very pleased to receive your letter.I'm glad to be an exchange student in your school.I will be

there on June 1st.（接受邀请） Before I go,I want to know about the course arrangement so that

I can prepare in advance. （询问课程）【高分句型一】At the same time,what's the weather like

and what clothes do I need to prepare?（询问天气） What rules do schools have to obey?Please

tell me more. （询问要注意的）

Looking forward to hearing from you.【高分句型二】

Yours，

Li Ping

【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。

6．假如你是李君，请你先阅读新西兰笔友Bob 的邮件并进行回复，

To：Li Jun

From：Bob

Hi Li Jun，

How is it going？I'm glad to tell you I have a good friend is outgoing and

often gives me a lot of about your friend？Could you tell me something about your

school life？

I'm looking forward to hearing from wishes!

.

Bob

【分析】【高分句型一】

Fanny is good at all his subjects.范妮擅长他所有的科目。

be good at擅长……

【高分句型二】

Let me tell you something about my school life.让我告诉你一些关于我的学校生活。

let sb do sth让某人做某事。

【解答】Dear Bob，

I'm glad to receive your my class，there is a has a round face and two big

hair is short and is tall and is Fanny，one of my good

is good at all his subjects.【高分句型一】In class，she listens to the teachers

studies English very often helps us to solve is very quiet，sometimes she is very active.（朋友）

Let me tell you something about my school life. 【高分句型二】Classes begin at 8：00 am.I

have four classes in the morning and three classes in the also have lots of after﹣school activities.I'm interested in computer science and I often go to the computer group in our

school.I like my colorful and interesting school life.（学校生活）

Yours，

Li Jun

【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。

7．德国姐妹学校的几位学生下周要来杭州游学，老师交给你一张便条，让你给他们组长

Jackson写封e﹣mail．告知相关注意事项，并给出你认为恰当的理由．

Things they need to take：

1．Umbrellas

2．Walking shoes

Things they need to do：

1．Learn about the Chinese customs

2．Get information about Hangzhou

注意：

*应包括便条中的所有内容，可适当拓展；

*词数不少于80词， 开头已给出（不计入总词数）．

【分析】【高分句型一】

You should wear walking shoes because we have to walk a lot．你应该穿步行鞋，因为我们要走很多路．

because引导原因状语从句．

【高分句型二】

We also need to get information about Hangzhou so that we can know what to do there．我们还需要了解杭州的情况，这样我们才能知道在那里做什么．

so that引导目的状语从句．

【解答】Hi Jackson，

I'm glad that you are coming to Hangzhou next week． but I think there is still something I

should let you and your friends know before you set off．（点题）You should wear walking

shoes because we have to walk a lot． 【高分句型一】It rains a lot in Hangzhou at this time，

so you should take an umbrella．（准备的东西）We need to learn more about the customs and

culture of Hangzhou，especially what kids of our own age there are interested in．（高分句型二）We also need to get information about Hangzhou so that we can know what to do

there．【高分句型二】（需要做什么）

We can't wait for you to arrive．We're really looking forward to your coming．（期待）

wish you a pleasant trip!

love

Li Ping

【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务．

8．假如你是李平，交换生Jim很快来你校学习，并住在你家。请阅读以下来自Jim的邮件并回复。

注意：（1）词数80左右；

（2）可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Li Ping，

Thanks for telling me about your school life. I can't wait to start my life there next month.

But I'm also wondering what to do in my free time. Can you tell me the best place to go to on

weekends in your neighborhood？ How often do you go there？ And why do you like it？

Look forward to your reply.

Yours，

Jim

Dear Jim，

Yours，

Li Ping

【分析】【高分句型一】

I think the care center is the best place to go on weekends in our neighborhood. 我认为护理中心是我们社区周末最好的去处。

I think+宾语从句。

the best place to do sth做某事的最好地方。

【高分句型二】

I chat with old people about their lives. 我和老人谈论他们的生活。

chat with和……聊天。

【解答】Dear Jim，

I can't wait to see you here. There are many things you can do in your free time.（点题） I think

the care center is the best place to go on weekends in our neighborhood. 【高分句型一】I go

there once a week. I go to the care center to help people in need. I teach children reading skills and

drawing. I chat with old people about their lives. 【高分句型二】I feel happy to do something

for others. I hope you will enjoy it too.（介绍空闲时间的活动）

Looking forward to your reply!（期待）

Yours，

Li Ping

【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。

______________________________________________________________________________________________

9．仔细观察图中乘客在公交车上的举止，参考所提供的短语写一篇短文．

talk loudly on the phone，smoke on the bus，drop litter，stand close to each other，be not

allowed，feel uncomfortable，It is better to…，social behavior，…

提示：

1．短文内容包括对图中乘客在公交车上的举止描述和你的建议四条．

2．词数80个左右．短文开头已写好，不计入总词数．

3．文中不得出现学校和个人的相关信息．

Impolite manners can be seen in public places quite often．Here is a situation from a No.56

bus．A man with a handbag on his knees （膝盖）is talking on the phone loudly，a tall man

is smoking，the other two men are talking loudly，a woman is eating on her seat and she dropped

a lot of litter．I think everyone should obey the bus regulations，it is not allowed to smoke on the

bus．It is better not to talk loudly，or others will feel uncomfortable．We should not drop litter

on the bus．Buses are public places，and everyone should pay attention to their social

behavior．

【分析】高分句型一

I think everyone should obey the bus regulations．我认为每个人都应该遵守公车管理规定．I

think是主句，后面的是宾语从句．

高分句型二

it is not allowed to smoke on the bus．在公共汽车上是不允许抽烟的．it is not allowed to do

sth．不允许做某事．

【解答】Impolite manners can be seen in public places quite often．Here is a situation from a

No.56 bus．A man with a handbag on his knees （膝盖）is talking on the phone loudly，a tall

man is smoking，the other two men are talking loudly，a woman is eating on her seat and she

dropped a lot of litter．【要点一，对图中乘客在公交车上的举止描述】I think everyone

should obey the bus regulations【高分句型一，注意宾语从句的使用】，it is not allowed to

smoke on the bus【高分句型二，注意固定句型的使用】．It is better not to talk loudly，or

others will feel uncomfortable．We should not drop litter on the bus．Buses are public places，and everyone should pay attention to their social behavior．【要点二，建议】

【点评】本篇写作需注意要求中所提供的要点，不可遗漏．需在平时积累相关的词汇，写作中注意语义通顺，符合逻辑关系．上下文之间可以适当使用连接词．如but，so，then等．

10．假如你是李平（ E﹣mail：liping2002@163 com），亚运会将在你所居住的杭州举办，现组委会向全市中学生发出一封邀请函招募志愿者，请阅读后进行自荐回复。

From：Asia Games Organizing Committee（亚运会组委会）

Dear students

We are now in great need of volunteers for the coming Asian Games，please send us your

personal information including your name，gender（性别），age，hobbies，E﹣mail address

and so on.

Also，in order to provide the best service for the athletes in the games，what kind of language

can you speak？What can you do for them in Hangzhou？

We welcome your application and look forward to you becoming part of our members！

Best Wishes！

Asia Games Organizing Committee

要求：

1.回复邮件必须包含邀请函中的要点问题，并可适当增加，使行文通顺、连贯；

2.回复邮件不得使用真实的人名、校名；

3.词数80左右，开头和结尾已给出（不计词数）。

To：Asia Games Organizing Committee

Subject：Application for a volunteer

Dear Sir/Madam，

My name is Li Ping.I would like to work as a volunteer for the Asian Games in Hangzhou.

__________________

Hope you can choose me！

Yours，

Li Ping

【分析】【高分句型一】

As a middle student，I am interested in sports and can speak English fluently.作为一名中学生，我对运动很感兴趣，英语也很流利。

be interested in对……感兴趣。

【高分句型二】

If you are interested in me，please email me atliping2002@.如果你对我感兴趣，请发邮件到liping2002@1 .

if引导条件状语从句。

【解答】Dear Sir/Madam，

My name is Li Ping.I would like to work as a volunteer for the Asian Games in Hangzhou.（点题）

I'm a girl of a middle student，I am interested in sports and can speak English fluently.

【高分句型一】So I suppose I'm qualified to be a volunteer for the s，I have a

good communicative skill and I'm considered to be an outgoing and helpful person at

's more，I'm familiar with the traffic transportation，the local food and so on.（要求） I'm sure I can also offer the best service to the athletes in the Games in you are

interested in me，please email me atliping2002@.【高分句型二】（联系方式）

Hope you can choose me！

Yours，

Li Ping

【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。

11．你的笔友city想了解你在上周志愿者活动。假如你是李平，请根据city在电子邮件中的提问，给她回信。字数在80字左右。

From：Cindy1998@

Subject：Interested in Volunteering

Hi.

How are you？I know you are busy with your math exam these is it going？I think

you are good at math，aren't？Anyway，it will be over your last letter，you mentioned

that you and your classmates organized a volunteer activity.I just want to know more about

that activity successful？

Cindy

Dear Cindy，

____________

Yours，

Li Ping

【分析】高分句型一：

We also helped clean up the city parks.我们还帮助清理了城市公园。help do sth表示帮着做某事。

高分句型二：

I think it's fantastic to be a volunteer.我觉得当志愿者太棒了。句子中think后面跟一个宾语从句。

【解答】Dear Cindy，

Thank you for your concern.I have finished my maths exam. （数学考试结束了）I did very

well in the exam because I was very good at maths.（擅长数学）Last Saturday，I did some

volunteer work with other volunteers.

Some of us put up handed out swept the also

helped clean up the city parks. 【高分句型一】When we finished all the work，we were very

tired but felt very happy at the same time.

I think it's fantastic to be a volunteer.【高分句型二】（志愿者活动）

What do you think of volunteering？Please write back soon!

Yours，

Li Ping

【点评】对于电子邮件的格式，与书信的格式相同，但英语的书信应注意和汉语的书信的格式相区别。另外，注意在表述时，应符合英语的表达习惯。

12．根据中文和英文提示，完成一篇不少于50词的文段写作．文中已给出内容不计入总词数．所给提示词语仅供选用．请不要写出你的校名和姓名．

在学校的学习及实践活动中，你了解了很多北京的旅游景点．如故宫（the Palace

Museum）、首都博物馆（the Capital Museum）、老舍茶馆（Lao She Teahouse）等．

假如你是李华，你的外国朋友Tony近期要到北京旅游．请你给他写一封邮件，告诉他北京近期的天气状况，给他推荐一个北京的旅游地点，简单介绍你推荐的理由，并告诉他应该做些什么准备．

提示词语：cold， famous， the Beijing Opera， warm clothes

提示问题：●What's the weather like in Beijing？

●Which place do you advise him to visit and why？

●What does he need to prepare？

Dear Tony，

I am very glad that you're coming to Beijing．

I'm looking forward to seeing you in Beijing．

Yours，

Li Hua

【分析】【高分句型一】

The Beijing Opera is one of the most famous traditional culture．京剧是最著名的传统文化之一．

one of the+形容词最高级+名词复数，表示最…之一

【高分句型二】

You'd better bring a camera with you．你最好带上相机．

had better do sth最好做某事．

【解答】Dear Tony，

Welcome to Beijing．Beijing is one of the most famous cities in the world．It has many places

of interest， such as the Palace Museum，the Capital Museum， Lao She Teahouse and so

on．Beijing also has a lot of traditional culture． The Beijing Opera is one of the most famous

traditional culture．【高分句型一】I hope you don't miss it．（名胜古迹和传统文化）Besides， the weather in Beijing is cold． You should wear warm clothes．（天气）I think the

Great Wall is the place you must visit， because it is one of the great wonders in the world．（建议爬长城）You'd better bring a camera with you．【高分句型二】 You can take many beautiful

pictures．（需要准备什么）

I'm looking forward to seeing you in Beijing．（期待）

Yours，

Li Hua

【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务．

13．假如你是Lin Li，你的美国笔友Rose想认识你的好朋友Han Mei．请根据下表中的信息，用英语写一封邮件给Rose介绍Han Mei．

Name

Favorite

Han Mei

Food

Color

Sport

Subjects

School

activities

Telephone number

要求：

1．邮件需包含表中所有信息，并可作适当想象和发挥；

2．语句通畅，书写规范，注意大小写字母和标点；

3．文中不得出现自己真实的姓名、班级和校名；

4．词数60左右，开头已经写好，不计入总词数．

Dear Rose，

Nice to meet you!Now let me tell you something about Han Mei．

______________．

Best wishes，

Lin Li

【分析】高分句型一

For subjects ，she likes P．E．and English because she thinks they are interesting and

useful．此句是以because 引起的原因状语从句．句子they are interesting and useful．是动词thinks的宾语．运用短语for subject"对于学科来说"，like sth "喜欢某事"，此句可翻译为"对于学科来说，她喜欢体育和英语，因为她认为它们有趣和有用．"

高分句型二

If you want to make friends with her，you can call her at 2654328 or email her at

hanmei@sina．com．此句是以if 引起的条件状语从句．主语用含有情态动词的句子，从句用一般现在时代替将来时．运用短语want to do sth "想做某事"，短语make friends

with sb "和某人交朋友"，短语call sb at …"以…给某人打电话"，此句可翻译为"如果你想和她交朋友，你可以给她打电话2654328或发邮件到hanmei@sina．com．"

【解答】Dear Rose，

Nice to meet you!Now let me tell you something about Han Mei．She is my best friend．She is

265﹣4328

E﹣mail

Age

14

Birthday

ice﹣cream

blue

basketball

P．E．&．English

June 20th

hanmei@sina．com

14 years old．Her birthday is on June 20th．（要点一，介绍好朋友的姓名、年龄、生日）Her favorite food is ice cream，because it tastes good．She likes blue best and most of her things

are blue．For sports，she likes playing basketball and she thinks it is fun．For subjects，she

likes P．E．and English because she thinks they are interesting and useful．（高分句型一）（要点二，介绍好朋友的爱好及原因．） But she is really busy this month．They have a

school trip on October 2nd．School Day is on October 10th．On the 15th and the 16th，they

have two ball games，soccer and volleyball．On the 28th，they have a book sale in the school

library．If you want to make friends with her，you can call her at 2654328 or email her at

hanmei@sina．com．（高分句型二）（要点三，介绍好朋友这月很忙碌，参加学校的几个活动及与她联系的方式．）

Best wishes，

Lin Li

【点评】本题是图表作文，能够根据图表提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务．

14．从下面两个题目中任选一题，根据中文和英文提示，完成一篇不少于50词的文段写作．文中已给出内容不计入总词数．所给提示词语仅供选用．请不要写出你的校名和姓名．

题目①

假如你是李华，是你校学生英语俱乐部的负责人．俱乐部要举办一次关于如何学好英语的微讲座（micro lecture）．请你给你校外教Peter发一封邮件，邀请他录制微讲座，向他说明举办本次讲座活动的目的，你建议讲座谈论的内容以及发送讲座视频给你的时间．

提示词语：difficult，make progress，advice，remember new words，reading

提示问题：●Why do you hold this activity？

●What do you advise Peter to talk about in the lecture？

●When would you like Peter to send you the video？

Dear Peter，

I'm writing to invite you to record a micro lecture on how to learn English well．

．

Thank you !

If there is anything more that you want to know，please tell me．

Yours，

Li Hua

【分析】[高分句型一]

We are all looking forward to it since Western culture always fascinates us．我们都很期待，因为西方文化总是让我们着迷．

此处是由连词"since "引导的原因状语从句，主句为"We are all looking forward to it"．

[高分句型二]

We shall be more than pleased if you could honor us with your micro lecture video．如果您能为

我们提供一次微型讲座的视频，我们将非常高兴．

此处为连词"if"引导的条件状语从句，主句为"We shall be more than pleased"．

【解答】Dear Peter，

I'm writing to invite you to record a micro lecture on how to learn English well．（写信目的） We have difficulty in remembering new words．we also want to know how to improve their

reading ability．Therefore，we hope you can give more suggestions in these two aspects in the

lecture．（微讲座内容） We are all looking forward to it since Western culture always

fascinates us． [高分句型一]

Could you please send the micro lecture to us this Saturday？We shall be more than pleased if you

could honor us with your micro lecture．[高分句型二] Your early reply will be greatly

appreciated．（期待对方回应）

Thank you !

If there is anything more that you want to know，please tell me．

【点评】在写作时要求能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务．

15．同学们，来到新学校，你认识你的新同学了吗？假如你是Andy，请写一篇文章介绍自己．写作要点：你的名字，年龄，来自哪里；介绍你的家庭成员；还可以说说你最喜欢的运动和音乐．

写作要求：拼写正确，语句通顺，意思连贯，适当发挥，书写工整，60个词左右．

【分析】高分句型一：

There are four people in my family．我家有四口人．句子考查there be结构，be动词遵循就近原则，people是复数形式，be动词使用are．

高分句型二：

My favourite music is"The Moon Reflected In Er﹣quan "and my favourite sport is playing

football．我最喜欢的音乐是《二泉映月》，我最喜欢的运动是踢足球．句子中playing用动名词形式作表语．

【解答】My name is Andy．I am 13 years old．I am from Dongguan．There are four people in

my family．【高分句型一】（我的基本信息）They are my father，my mother，my sister and

I．（家庭成员）My favourite music is"The Moon Reflected In Er﹣quan "and my favourite

sport is playing football．【高分句型二】（爱好）

【点评】本题是小作文，能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务．

16．同学之间的友谊本该是纯真的，但是最近在少数校园里出现了一些不和谐的现象，有些学生欺 凌（bully）自己的同学，对同学造成了伤害，请你写一篇 80 词左右文章，说说你对此事的看法，

要求如下：

1．写写你身边曾经发生过的或你听说过的校园欺凌事件（school﹣bullies ），以及你对这

件事的看 法．

2．请给那些被欺凌的同学三点建议，该如何面对同学的欺凌．

3．呼吁大家都来阻止校园欺凌，共建平安美好校园．

注意： 词数不少于 80．

_________．

【分析】【高分句型一】

First， when this kind of thing happens， you must ask your teacher or parents for help．首先，当这种事情发生时，你必须向你的老师或父母寻求帮助．

when引导时间状语从句．

ask sb for help向某人寻求帮助．

【高分句型二】

Second， if possible， run away or find a safe place as quickly as possible．第二，如果可能的话，尽快逃离或者找到一个安全的地方．

if引导条件状语从句．

as quickly as possible尽快．

【解答】Recently，some students bully their classmates in a small number of schools and it

causes harm to the students．（现象）

Last week， there was a school bullying in our school． A boy in seventh grade was blackmailed

for money by some boys in ninth grade．The little boy disagreed．As a result，he was badly

beaten．（身边的事例）

If you were the boy， what would you do？ Here is some advice．First， when this kind of thing

happens， you must ask your teacher or parents for help．【高分句型一】Second， if

possible， run away or find a safe place as quickly as possible．【高分句型一】Third， if you

can't run away， protect yourself and don't fight back．（建议）

I hope everyone can stop school﹣bullies and build a safe and beautiful schools together．（呼吁）

【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务．

17．假如你是刘英，琳达（ Linda）是两年前就读于你校的交换生，昨天你收到了她的电子邮件．

Dear Liu Ying

Long lime no see How is everything going？I miss you very much．I think you must be

beautiful now．Write and tell me what you look like now．

Yours，

Linda．

请根据上面的邮件，给她回一封邮件．内容包括：

1．比以前长高了，更健康了；

2．看电视、玩电脑游戏的时间少了，学习的时间多了；

3．性格变得更加外向了，交了很多朋友．

4．词数70个左右（开头和结尾不计入总词数）．

Dear Linda，

Long time no see!I also miss you very much．

Come to visit me if you're free．

Yours，

Liu Ying

【分析】【高分句型一】

I used to spend too much time watching TV or playing computer games．我过去花太多的时间看电视或玩电脑游戏．used to do sth．过去经常做某事；spend doing sth．花费时间做某事．

【高分句型二】

I am happy I have changed so much!我很高兴我改变了这么多！这是一个宾语从句，I am

happy是主句，后面的是宾语从句．

【解答】Dear Linda，

Long time no see!I also miss you very much．I am very glad to receive your letter and I am

willing to tell you some changes on me．Now I am much higher than before and I am much

healthier．（比以前长高了，更健康了）I used to spend too much time watching TV or playing

computer games【高分句型一】，but now I have changed a lot．I prefer to spend time on my

study．（看电视、玩电脑的时间少了，学习的时间多了）At the same time，I have been

more outgoing and easygoing．I make a lot of friends and I can get well on with all of them．I

am happy I have changed so much!【高分句型二】（性格变得外向了，交了很多朋友）

Come to visit me if you are free．

Yours，

Liu Ying

【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务．

18．根据要求完成短文写作，请将作文写在答题卡指定的位置上．

假如你是李华，英国某中学与你所在的学校是姐妹学校．该校校长读到以上这篇短文后，对广东文化产生兴趣，准备组织学生来你的校进行关于广东传统文化的研学交流．请你写一篇发言稿，在欢迎晚会上向他们介绍研学活动的相关安排．

内容包括：

1．推荐晚会上的两种广东传统食物．

2．介绍两项广东传统文化活动的安排．（包括活动的时间、地点和内容）

参考活动：欣赏粤剧（Cantonese opera），体验功夫（kung fu），参加广东历史讲座等

作文要求：

1．不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现学校真实的名称和学生的真实姓名．

2．语句连贯，词数80个左右．作文的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数，也不必抄写在答题卡上．

Good evening，everyone．I am Li Hua，chairman of the Students Union．I am very pleased

to welcome you to the

party．___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

I hope you'll enjoy your stay here!

【分析】高分句型一：

I believe you will be attracted by its beauty．

我相信你会被它的美丽所吸引．will be attracted 一般将来时的被动语态，将会被吸引

高分句型二：

From the activities，I think you will have a better understanding of the culture of Guangdong．

从活动中，我想你会更好地了解广东的文化．have a better understanding of …更好的了解……

【解答】Good evening，everyone．I am Li Hua，chairman of the Students Union．I am very

pleased to welcome you to the party．We've prepared some traditional food for you，such as

shrimp dumplings，steamed pork ribs．（ 两种广东传统食物：虾饺，粉蒸排骨）．I wish

you'll like them．As for the schedule of your activities，you'll watch a Cantonese opera in the

music hall on the first day．I believe you will be attracted by its beauty． 【高分句型一】And

you are sure to feel more excited on the second day，as you will learn kungfu from a master in

the gym．From the activities，I think you will have a better understanding of the culture of

Guangdong． 【高分句型二】（两项广东传统文化活动的安排：欣赏粤剧，体验功夫）I

hope you'll enjoy your stay here!

【点评】在解答写作这类试题时，要根据短文的中心思想考虑如何开头、展开和结尾，设想几个承上启下的连词，将主要句型、关键词语草草记下，形成提纲，写时切忌结构分散，废话连篇，严重跑题．

19．假如你叫Bi，今年13岁，喜爱打网球和阅读，拥有很多体育用品和书，请用英语介绍你的情况．

内容包括：1．你有很多体育用品，包括10个网球，5个网球拍等；

2．你每天放学后跟朋友们打网球感觉很放松；

3．你也喜欢看书，有200本书，放在书架上．

要求：1．用第一人称，时态为一般现在时；

2．不能出现自己的真实姓名和学校名；

3．语言准确得当，条理清晰，书写工整，且诃数70左右．

【分析】【高分句型一】

I play tennis with my friends after school every day because I feel relaxed．

每天放学后我和我的朋友打网球，因为我感到放松．because引导原因状语从句．

【高分句型二】

I think reading books will make me better．

我认为读书会使我变得更好．I think+宾语从句；reading books 是动名词作主语；make sb+形容词，使某人…的．

【解答】My name is Bi． I'm 13 years old．I like playing tennis and reading．（基本资料）I

have a great sports collection．（基本资料）I have 10 tennis balls， 5 tennis rackets and so

on．（体育用品收藏）I play tennis with my friends after school every day because I feel

relaxed．【高分句型一】（运动）I like reading books， too．I think reading books will make

me better． 【高分句型二】I have 200 books and they are all neatly put on the bookshelf．（读书）

【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务．

20．根据要求完成短文写作，请将作文写在答题卡指定的位置上．

假设你是上文"共享小图"海报中的 Bryan Lim，经过三个月的运营之后，请你写封电子邮件给 Todd Bol，谈谈你对"共享小图"的感受．内容包括：

1．简单介绍你的身份，并说明写信意图；

2．这种图书馆的好处（两点）；

3．"共享小图"存在的问题及其原因，并询问建议．

作文要求：

1．不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称和学生的真实姓名．

2．语句连贯，词数80个左右．作文的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数，也不必抄写在答题卡上．

Dear Todd，

I hope this email finds you well． I am Bryan Lim，a director of the Little Free Library for

our neighbors in Sunshine Park Community．Knowing that you run a little free library as well，so I would like to share my experience with you．On one hand，this kind of library is creative

and very convenient for people who enjoy reading．Moreover，on the other hand，not only can

it be beneficial to our neighbors but also it can be functioned much more easily．However，everything has its pros and cons．The library is free，which means it is free for

everybody．Therefore，it's very hard for us to monitor whether books can be returned on time．I

am not so familiar to deal with the problems．I urgently need your advice．Can you do me the

favor？

I am looking forward to your reply．

Best

regards，

Bryan

Lim

【分析】高分句型一

this kind of library is creative and very convenient for people who enjoy reading．这种图书馆很有创意，对喜欢阅读的人也很方便．这是who enjoy reading引导的定语从句，先行词是

people．

高分句型二

it's very hard for us to monitor whether books can be returned on time．我们很难监控图书能否按时归还．这是it is +形容词+for sb．to do sth．句型，对于……来说……是……的．

【解答】Dear Todd，

I hope this email finds you well．I am Bryan Lim，a director of the Little Free Library for our

neighbors in Sunshine Park Community．Knowing that you run a little free library as well，so I

would like to share my experience with you．【要点一，简单介绍，并说明写信意图】On one

hand，this kind of library is creative and very convenient for people who enjoy reading【高分句型一】．Moreover，on the other hand，not only can it be beneficial to our neighbors but also it

can be functioned much more easily 【要点二，这种图书馆的好处】．However，everything

has its pros and cons．The library is free，which means it is free for everybody．Therefore，it's

very hard for us to monitor whether books can be returned on time【高分句型二】．I am not so

familiar to deal with the problems．I urgently need your advice．Can you do me the favor？

I am looking forward to your reply． 【要点三，"共享小图"存在的问题及其原因，并询问建议】

Best regards

Bryan Lim

【点评】本篇写作需注意要求中所提供的要点，不可遗漏．需在平时积累相关的词汇，写作中注意语义通顺，符合逻辑关系．上下文之间可以适当使用连接词，如but，so，then等．

21．健康饮食一直是人们关注的问题。假如你是李华， 你将在下周英语课上介绍Healthy

Diet 这本书， 并作健康饮食的呼吁。请你根据以下提示与要求， 写一篇发言稿。

注意：

1. 80词左右（开头已给出， 不计入总词数）；

2. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息。否则不予评分。

Healthy Diet

Good afternoon， everyone. Today I am here to give you a talk about healthy diet. I have read a

book named Healthy Diet.

.

【分析】【高分句型一】

This book tells us what a healthy diet is. 这本书告诉我们什么是健康饮食。

what引导宾语从句。

【高分句型二】

They are bad for your health. 它们对你的健康有害。

be bad for对……有害。

【解答】Healthy Diet

Good afternoon， everyone. Today I am here to give you a talk about healthy diet. I have read a

book named Healthy Diet.（点题）

This book tells us what a healthy diet is. 【高分句型一】It means eating different kinds of

healthy food every day.（定义）The book describes the importance of healthy can help

us form good living addition， it can also help us to keep happy.（目的）Here is some

advice about healthy diet.

First，Don't eat too much oil and salt. You should eat more vegetables and fruit. second，you

need enough sleep or rest. Third，you mustn't drink wine or smoke .They are bad for your health.

【高分句型二】（建议）

【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。

22．假如你是李华，最近学校开展"全民阅读进校园"读书活动，你和你的同学在课余时间看了许多书．请你根据表格的提示，以演讲的形式分享你最喜欢的一个故事并发表感想．

故事名称

作者

故事内容

The Gifts

美国作家0． Henry

人物：Della & Jim

时间：on Christmas Eve

事件：卖掉自己为之自豪的物品﹣﹣美丽的头发和金表 购买圣诞节礼物 表链和套发梳

得到了更有价值的东西﹣﹣爱

读后感想

读书活动的益处

注意：

（1）参考词汇： gold watch， beautiful hair，a watch chain，a set of combs

（2）请适当拓展，不能直译内容；

……（至少一点）

……（至少一点）

（3）词数左右（文章开头及结尾已给出，不计入词数）；

（4）不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分．

【分析】【高分句型一】

It told us a story that a couple Della and Jim bought gifts each other．

它给我们讲述了德拉和吉姆夫妇互相买礼物的一个故事．that引导定语从句．

【高分句型二】

There are many beautiful words in the book， which makes us enjoy the beauty of the world．

文章中有许多优美词汇，这让我们享受到了世界的美丽．which引导非限制性定语从句．

【解答】Boys and girls ，today I introduce a story written by a famous American writer called

O．Henry．（作者）It told us a story that a couple Della and Jim bought gifts each other．【高分句型一】 On Christmas Eve，They sold what they were proud of ﹣ beautiful hair and a gold

watch． Della sold her beautiful hair to buy a watch chain for Jim and Jim sold his gold watch to

buy a set of combs for Della．In the end， they got something more valuable ﹣﹣ love．（故事内容）

I am deeply moved by the great love between the couple．They both sold their treasures just to

buy a gift for their lover．（感受）

Have a book and you will have a good time !There are many beautiful words in the book， which

makes us enjoy the beauty of the world．【高分句型二】 （读书活动的益处）

【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务．

23．假如你是王林，你发现班上许多同学不重视课外阅读．请你根据下表提示，针对这个

问题进行阐述与分析，并提出"读好书"的建议． 读书的好处

读书的好处

●增长知识，了解世界

●学会思考

●作业多

●没读书习惯

●花时间网络或游戏

如何读书的建议

建议 （至少一点）

不读书的原因

要求：（1）短文应包括表中所有要点，可适当发挥；

（2）文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息；

（3）词数 80 ﹣100 左右． （开头已给出，不计入词数）

Reading is very important in our life． Reading has many benefits．Through reading we

can learn more about the world．Besides，it can help us think better．Last but not least，reading can make our life more colourful．

At present only a few students do some reading after class．Here are several reasons．First of

all，quite a lot of students are burdened with too much homework．Still others haven't formed a

habit of reading．They would rather spend their spare time on TV or on the Internet．

Here are my suggestions．For one thing，teachers are supposed to limit the amount of our

homework so that we can have more time to read．For another，it's a good idea to form reading

clubs and learn from each other．

【分析】【高分句型一】

①Last but not least，②reading can ③make our life more colourful．最后也是最重要的是，阅读可以让我们的生活更加丰富多彩．

①last but not least最后也是最重要的

②reading动名词作主语

③make sth+adj 让…怎么样

【高分句型二】

①For one thing，teachers ②are supposed to limit the amount of our homework ③so that we can

have more time ④to read．首先，老师应该限制我们的作业量，这样我们就可以有更多的时间去阅读．

①For one thing…For another…一方面…另一方面…

②be supposed to do sth 应该做某事

③so that引导的目的状语从句，也可以用in order that．

④动词不定式作为目的状语．

【解答】Reading is very important in our life．Reading has many benefits．Through

reading we can learn more about the world．Besides，it can help us think better．Last but not

least，reading can make our life more colourful．【高分句型一】（读书的好处）

At present only a few students do some reading after class．Here are several reasons．First of

all，quite a lot of students are burdened with too much homework．Still others haven't formed a

habit of reading．They would rather spend their spare time on TV or on the Internet．（不读书的原因）

Here are my suggestions．For one thing，teachers are supposed to limit the amount of our

homework so that we can have more time to read．【高分句型二】For another，it's a good idea

to form reading clubs and learn from each other．（如何读书的建议）

【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务．

24．劳逸结合，学习才能事半功倍。平时放学后你是怎么放松自己的呢？本周英语角就此话题展开讨论，请根据所给表格提示，用英语写一篇短文，为你的发言做准备。文中不得出现真实的人名和地名，词数不得少于80个词。

写作提示

Beginning

Body Part

How to relax

/

提示词

After﹣school activities；relax

Sing songs；walk

What you get

Ending

/

Pleasure；healthier；friends

relaxed；colorful；meaningful

.

【分析】【高分句型一】

I go to the singing club on Tuesday where I sing folk songs or foreign songs.星期二我去唱歌俱乐部，在那里我唱民歌或外国歌曲。定语从句

【高分句型二】

I find that I get a lot of pleasure from singing and that I have become healthier than I used to be

because of walking.我发现我从唱歌中得到了很多乐趣，而且因为散步，我变得比以前更健康了。宾语从句

【解答】After a busy school day，I usually relax by taking after﹣school activities.I go to the

singing club on Tuesday where I sing folk songs or foreign songs.【高分句型一】I also go to the

walking club on Thursday and I walk with other members for an hour. （如何放松）I find that I

get a lot of pleasure from singing and that I have become healthier than I used to be because of

walking. 【高分句型二】Besides，I feel energetic and I don't think studies are boring anymore.I

have also made a lot of friends in these clubs.（得到什么）

In short，after﹣school activities make me relaxed and make my life colorful and meaningful.（感受）

【点评】这是一篇提纲作文，题目要求围绕提示内容写作，命题既有限制又给予学生发挥的空间。在写作中要综合运用所学知识，适当运用连词、副词等进行过渡。

25．

From： Bill

Hi， Li Ping，

How is everything going？ Last month， I saw a movie called My People My Homeland.

It's such a great movie and it showed me the great change China has made. I am really

interested in your hometown. I wonder where your hometown is？ What did it use to be like？

And what's the biggest change in your city？ Besides， could you please tell me what your

city is famous for？ Hope you can tell me more about it.

Looking forward to hearing from you.

Dear Bill，

I am glad to hear from you.

Yours，

Li Ping

【分析】【高分句型一】

What's more， the biggest change is that more and more people are living better and happier lives.更重要的是，最大的变化是越来越多的人生活得更好，更幸福。

that引导表语从句。

【高分句型二】

Today's Shijiazhuang is a beauty and modern city， which is famous because of its rich of human

geological resources.今天的石家庄是一座美丽而现代的城市，因其丰富的人文地质资源而闻名于世。

which引导非限定性定语从句。

【解答】Dear Bill，

I am glad to hear from you and I am happy to share with you about my hometown，

Shijiazhuang. （点题）Shijiazhuang is the capital of Hebei province， 280 km to Beijing in the

south and 270 km to Tianjin. Shijiazhuang is quite different from ten years ago. In the past， there

was a little road in the city. The road was very narrow and the traffic was very heavy. There were

only three parks in the city at ten years ago. The air pollution was very serious. （过去的样子）However， with the development of social economy and science and technology， Shijiazhuang

has been developing in a good direction. The roads get wider， and there are more and more parks.

Of course， the air also improved a lot. What's more， the biggest change is that more and more

people are living better and happier lives.【高分句型一】（哪些变化以及最大的变化）

Today's Shijiazhuang is a beauty and modern city， which is famous because of its rich of human

geological resources.【高分句型二】（以什么出名） It attracts many foreigners to come here

to go sightseeing and makes here develop very fast. Welcome to my hometown with your family.（表示欢迎）

Yours，

Li Ping

【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。

26．为了缓解疫情对我们的影响，进一步促进社会经济的复苏，我们现在鼓励人们开始发展地摊经济（street vending economy）．这引发了学生们讨论这种经济形式给我们带来的利与弊．为此，学校英文报社将在下期开设专栏讨论这一话题．你采访了一些同学，写了一篇题为"What street vending brings us"的报道．内容如下：

要求：1．短文需包括所有内容要点，要求语句通顺、意思连贯；

2．省略号处展开合理想象；

3．词数90个左右，短文开头已经给出，不计入总词数．

What street vending brings us

Our society has been affected by the spread of the novel coronavirus pneumonia（新冠肺炎）， so it is time for us to introduce a new economy， street vending， to our society，

hoping to fasten the development of our economy．

____________．

【分析】【高分句型一】

We can buy what we need in our neighborhood．我们可以在附近买到我们需要的东西．

what引导宾语从句．

【高分句型二】

There is not much guarantee for the quality of the goods．这批货物的质量没有多少保证．

there be句型表示某地有某物．

【解答】What street vending brings us

Our society has been affected by the spread of the novel coronavirus pneumonia（新冠肺炎），

so it is time for us to introduce a new economy， street vending， to our society， hoping to

fasten the development of our economy．（点题）

The street vending has many advantages． We can buy what we need in our neighborhood． In

addition， the prices of goods are not too high． Because we can see the real things， we are not

easy to be cheated． However， it may cause traffic jam． The quality of the goods may be

bad．（利和弊）

In my opinion， we should develop this kind of economy． In this way， many people can take

part in．Street vending can make the society develop faster． This can provide more chances to

make money for more people．（我的观点）

【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务．

27．你们班有很多电视迷，很多同学不知道选择什么节目，你决定推荐央视的《朗读者》给同学们．

1．由董卿主持，每次涵盖不同主题，深受人们喜爱，值得观看；

2．朗读让人认识世界，增长知识；

3．邀请不同人来朗读，讲述感人故事；

4．比如，一位父亲通过读一封信来表达对儿子的爱；

5．这个节目鼓励我们……我们应该……

注意：1．必须包括上述所有要点，语句通顺，意思连贯；

2．要点中第5点省略号处请用2﹣3句话合理发挥；

3．词数90个左右，短文开头不计入总词数．

参考词汇：主持：host

A new program called The Reader is a great surprise to us viewers．I would like to recommend it

to you．____________．

【分析】【高分句型一】

It is popular with people．它深受人们欢迎．

be popular with受……欢迎

【高分句型二】

This program encourages us to read as many books as possible and communicate with different

people to show our feelings by reading aloud．这个节目鼓励我们阅读尽可能多的书籍，并与不同的人交流，通过大声朗读表达我们的感情．

encourage sb to do sth鼓励某人做某事；as…as…和…一样；by doing sth通过做某事．

【解答】A new program called The Reader is a great surprise to us viewers．I would like to

recommend it to you．（点题）

This program is hosted by Dong Qing with different topics everytime．It is popular with

people．【高分句型一】It is worth watching．（深受喜爱） It tries to tell viewers that reading

helps people know about the world and improve their knowledge．（朗读让人认识世界，增长知识） It invites different people to read aloud and tell the moving stories behind them．（节目内容） For example，once a father showed his son his love by reading a letter．（举例说明）

This program encourages us to read as many books as possible and communicate with different

people to show our feelings by reading aloud．【高分句型二】We should try to be a good

reader．（节目的意义）

【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务．

28．Tom 要到中国来读书，想住在一个中国人的家里，更好地体验中国中学生的生活．请你写一篇短文向他介绍你自己，你的家人和你的房间．

注意：1．分三个方面介绍．

2．重点介绍你的房间布置，例举3件左右的东西的布置．

3．字数：50左右．

4．文章中不得出现真实的人名，班名和校名．

．

【分析】高分句型一：

He goes to work on foot every day．他每天步行去上班．go to work表示去上班，on foot表示步行；every day每天．

高分句型二：

She goes to work by car．她开车去上班．go to work表示去上班，by car表示开车．

【解答】I am a student．I am thirteen years old．I like basketball．My school is very

beautiful．（介绍自己）There are three people in my family． They are my father， my mother

and I． My father is a doctor． He works very hard． He goes to work on foot every day． 【高分句型一】My father is not very tall， but he is strong， he is very kind to his patients and he

loves his work．My mother is a teacher． She works in a middle school． She goes to work by

car． 【高分句型二】She is a very good teacher in my eyes．（具体介绍家人） My room has

a computer，By computer are a bed and a desk，On top of the desk is a bookshelf，in the house

there is an air conditioner．This is my home．（介绍我的房间）

【点评】书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文．它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力．所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数．

29．Suppose Alison is your e﹣pal in Britain．She is very interested in your school life in

NFLS．Please write an email to her with around 60 words．

Your email should include：

1．your feeling about your school life in NFLS；

2．school clubs or extra﹣curricular activities in NFLS；

3．your favourite club or activity and the reason why you like it．

Hi Alison，

How are things going？Hope you're well．

．

【分析】高分句型一：

I have learned that you are very interested in my school life in NFLS．我知道你对我在NFL的学校生活很感兴趣．句子使用了that引导的宾语从句．be interested in 表示对……感兴趣．

高分句型二：

I like English corner best because it helps me improve my spoken English a lot．句子使用了because引导的原因状语从句．help sb do sth表示帮着某人做某事．

【解答】Hi Alison，

How are things going？Hope you're well．I have learned that you are very interested in my

school life in NFLS．【高分句型一】Let me tell you something about it．（引出话题）

My school life in NFLS is very busy and colorful．（学校生活的感受） Everyone in my school

is smart and outstanding．There are many kinds of extra﹣curricular activities in our school and

we can be a member of any club we like．（学校俱乐部或课外活动） I like English corner best

because it helps me improve my spoken English a lot．【高分句型二】（最喜欢的俱乐部）

Do you like my school life？Hope you can come and experience it yourself．（希望）

Sincerely，

Alice

【点评】首先认真审题，看清文章的要求和要点；其次，理顺自己的行文思路；再次紧扣要点，注意句子之间的连接与过渡；最后要仔细检查是否有单词拼写错误和标点的误用等，还要注意是否出现语法错误，有无重复遗漏，大小写是否正确，词数是否符合要求等．

30．你在英国的笔友Tom最近很苦恼，写信向你求助．请结合所给背景新闻，根据Tom的来信，写一封回信帮助他．

注意：

1．回信必须解决来信提及的全部问题，并结合新闻作适当发挥．

2．语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范．

3．词数80左右，信件的开头已为你写出，不计入总词数．

Dear Lin Tao，

I'm so worried these days． Perhaps you've known the news． Is Maths really so important？

How can I learn Maths well？ I have difficulty learning it． What should I do？ Can you offer me

some suggestions？ Hope to hear from you soon．

Yours

Tom

Dear Tom，

It's a pity that British pupils were 3 years behind Chinese in Maths． I think Maths is of great

importance to us and we must try to study it well．

In fact， learning Maths well is not so difficult． First， listen to your teacher carefully and take

notes in class． This is the most important for you． Then， you'd better do some exercises to

practice sums in your spare time． Last， believe yourself． If you keep trying， nothing is

impossible． Of course， you'll face some difficulties． Don't worry! Surely your teacher and

classmates can give you a helping hand．

Follow these steps， you'll love Maths and finally be good at it．．

．

Best wishes

Lin Tao

【分析】高分句型一

I think Maths is of great importance to us and we must try to study it well．我认为数学对我们很重要，我们必须好好学习．这是一个宾语从句，I hope是主句，后面的是宾语从句．

高分句型二

If you keep trying， nothing is impossible．如果你继续努力，没有什么是不可能的． 这是if引导的条件状语从句，如果……．

【解答】Dear Tom，

It's a pity that British pupils were 3 years behind Chinese in Maths． I think Maths is of great

importance to us and we must try to study it well【高分句型一，注意宾语从句的使用】．【开头点明主题】

In fact， learning Maths well is not so difficult． First， listen to your teacher carefully and take

notes in class． This is the most important for you． Then， you'd better do some exercises to

practice sums in your spare time． Last， believe yourself． If you keep trying， nothing is

impossible【高分句型二，注意if引导的条件状语从句的使用】． Of course， you'll face

some difficulties． Don't worry! Surely your teacher and classmates can give you a helping

hand．【正文部分详细介绍怎么学数学】

Follow these steps， you'll love Maths and finally be good at it． 【结尾紧扣主题】

Best wishes

Lin Tao

【点评】本篇写作需注意要求中所提供的要点，不可遗漏．需在平时积累相关的词汇，写作中注意语义通顺，符合逻辑关系．上下文之间可以适当使用连接词．如but， so，then等．

31．Everyone has his or her interests and hobbies.

Please write a short passage within 50 words about one of your hobbies and why you like

it， .

【分析】【高分句型一】

Also，I take part in all kinds of sports in order to become stronger．

此外，我参加各种体育活动来增强体质．in order to 为了，目的是

【高分句型二】

All in all，the more I exercise， the healthier I'll be．

总之，我锻炼得越多，我就越健康．the +比较级，the+比较级，越……越……

【解答】

My hobby

My hobby is to play sports．Here are the reasons for taking part in sports．（开篇点题）I

usually play sports when I feel tired after study． I just want to relax myself and have fun．（锻炼可以使人放松，有乐趣） Also，I take part in all kinds of sports in order to become

stronger．【高分句型一】（变得更强壮） What's more，I want to be slim and pretty by doing

sports．（变得漂亮）

All in all，the more I exercise， the healthier I'll be．【高分句型二】

【点评】书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文．它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力．所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数．

32．YOUR OPINIONS ARE WANTED

Hi！I'm May，the editor of Teens magazine.

Our magazine has set up a column（专栏）about teenage teenagers write to us

about their really need you help to solve their problems.

注意：1. 词数 80 左右，开头已经给出，不计入总词数；

2. 内容须包括所有要点，全文连贯、通顺；

3. 文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。

Dear friends，

I hear that you have some teenage problems in your daily life. I hope I can help you in some ways.

.

Best wishes

Li Hua

【分析】【高分句型一】

I think you should have a good communication with your parents and let them know how you feel.我认为你应该和你的父母好好沟通，让他们知道你的感受。

I think+宾语从句。

have a good communication with…与……好好交流一下。

【高分句型二】

You can make a study plan so that you know when to study and when to play.你可以制定一个学习计划，这样你就知道什么时候学习，什么时候玩。

so that引导目的状语从句。

【解答】Dear friends，

I hear that you have some teenage problems in your daily life. I hope I can help you in some ways.（点题）

Many teenagers today have similar problems to have too much don't

have enough time for their hobbies. So your problem is very common and you don't have to worry

too much.（表示安慰）

I think you should have a good communication with your parents and let them know how you feel.

【高分句型一】They will understand you. Your parents must love you and they want to make

you a better can make a study plan so that you know when to study and when to play.【高分句型二】That way， they won't worry about your study.（建议）

I hope my advice will help you.（希望）

Best wishes

Li Hua

【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。

33．在一节写作课上，老师要求你们写一篇名为"心目中的同学"的短文，现在请你用英文来介绍一下你的同学Mike．

1）Mike学习刻苦，喜欢思考，能想出许多有创意的点子；

2）他小时候读了许多有关科学家的书籍，爱迪生的故事对他影响最大；

3）他对搞小发明很着迷，迄今为止，他已几次因其发明获奖；

4）现在学习忙碌，但他从未放弃爱好，他说这真是其乐无穷；

5）他的梦想…我认为…

注意事项：

1）短文须包括所给内容要点，要求语句通顺、意思连贯；

2）第5要点的内容必须用2至3句话展开合理想象，作适当发挥；

3）词数90个左右，短文开头已经给出，不计入总词数．

参考词汇：

有创意的 creative 爱迪生 Edison

My classmate Mike ishard﹣working．He likes thinking and can come up with creative ideas．In

his childhood，he read many books about scientists．The story of Edison influenced him

most．He is crazy about inventing things．So far，he has won several awards for

inventions．Now he is busy with his study，but he has never given up his hobby．He says it's

great fun for him．His dream is to be an inventor as great as Edison．I think he will be known for

his achievements and realize his dream some day．

【分析】这是一篇提纲作文．内容是介绍一下你的同学Mike．时态主要为一般现在时和现在完成时．人称主要为第三人称．

写作思路：考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文．

其次考生可从以下几个方面展开作文，即本文的写作要点：

1）Mike学习刻苦，喜欢思考，能想出许多有创意的点子；

2）他小时候读了许多有关科学家的书籍，爱迪生的故事对他影响最大；

3）他对搞小发明很着迷，迄今为止，他已几次因其发明获奖；

4）现在学习忙碌，但他从未放弃爱好，他说这真是其乐无穷；

5）他的梦想…我认为…

常用到的重点短语：

come up with 想出…

be crazy about 对…着迷

give up 放弃

be known for 因…而著名

【高分句型】

1．His dream is ①to be an inventor②as great as Edison．

①动词不定式做表语，和be动词is构成系表结构．

②as…as与…一样．

2．I think①he will ②be known for his achievements and realize his dream some day

①后接省略了that的宾语从句．

②be known for 因…而著名

【解答】My classmate Michael is hard﹣working．He likes thinking and can come up with

creative ideas．（Mike学习刻苦，喜欢思考，能想出许多有创意的点子）In his childhood，he read many books about scientists．The story of Edison influenced him most．（他小时候读了许多有关科学家的书籍，爱迪生的故事对他影响最大）He is crazy about inventing

things．So far，he has won several awards for inventions．（他对搞小发明很着迷，迄今为止，他已几次因其发明获奖）Now he is busy with his study，but he has never given up his

hobby．He says it's great fun for him．（现在学习忙碌，但他从未放弃爱好，他说这真是其乐无穷）His dream is to be an inventor as great as Edison．【高分句型】（他的梦想是成为像爱迪生一样的发明家）I think he will be known for his achievements and realize his dream some

day．【高分句型】（我认为他会实现梦想）

【点评】这是一篇提纲作文．考生在把握了文章的中心后，应在内心构思一个基本的框架，并考虑使用恰当的词语、短语和句型，以充分地表达文章的内容．尽可能地充分利用所学的短语或句型来表述具体的内容，避免使用无把握或偏、难句型．注意所写句子要符合英语的表达习惯

34．澳大利亚此次发生了特大丛林火灾，火势蔓延了四分之一的国土．请认真阅读以下导图，用英文写一篇短文，贴在 School Newsletter 上．

Big fires

Possible causes （原因）：

●humans' activities

●…

Facts：

●hot， dry， less rain

●bush fires， forest fires

Results：

●800 buildings fell down

●animals like koalas died

●thick fog everywhere

Your feelings：

…

注意事项：1．短文内容须包括导图要点，要求表达清楚、语法正确、适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

2．词数在 80 个左右，首尾已在答题卷上给出，不计入总词数；

3．短文必须写在答题卷指定的位置上．

__________________________________________．

【分析】【高分句型一】

If someone smokes in the forest， it can easily lead to forest fires．

如果有人在森林里吸烟，很容易导致森林火灾．if引导条件状语从句．

【高分句型二】

I hope people should strengthen the forest protection， so that such a disaster will not happen

again．

我希望人们应该加强森林保护，这样灾难就不会再发生了．I hope+宾语从句．so that引导目的状语从句．

【解答】Australia has been hit by big fires that have spread across a quarter of the

country．（点题）

I think there may be two main reasons． First， it may be caused by humans'

activities．Second， it may be caused by the weather．（主要原因）It's summer in Australia

now． It is very hot and there is less rain，so the forest is very dry．If someone smokes in the

forest， it can easily lead to forest fires．【高分句型一】（条件）The forest fires have made

800 buildings fell down，a lot of animals like koalas died．The thick fog is everywhere．The

environmental pollution in Australia is very serious．（结果）

I feel sorry about this． I hope people should strengthen the forest protection， so that such a

disaster will not happen again．【高分句型二】（感谢）

【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务．

35．在初三的英语学习中，你认识了很多名人。21世纪英文报正面向初三学生征稿，要求介绍一位你最喜爱的名人。你草拟了提纲，请根据提纲用英语写一篇短文参加投稿。

注意事项：

（1）短文根据提纲自拟，要求语句通顺，意思连贯，符合题意；

（2）提供的人名非限定性内容，仅供参考；

（3）词数在90个左右，短文开头已经给出，不计入总词数；

（4）短文必须写在答题卡指定的位置上。

【分析】【高分句型一】

She spent her last few years working closely with UNICEF.她在生命的最后几年与联合国儿童基金会密切合作。

spend…doing sth花费……做某事。

【高分句型二】

I like her not only for her success in films but for her efforts in charity work. 我喜欢她不仅是因为她在电影上的成功，还因为她在慈善工作上的努力。

not only…but also…不仅……而且……

【解答】My favourite person is Audrey Hepburn.（最喜爱的人） She is a great beauty， a

great actress and a great humanitarian. Her beauty brought her to the attention of a famous French

writer. From then on， she started to play the lead role in many films. Her achievements went

beyond the film industry. She began to work for UNICEF later. She spent her last few years

working closely with UNICEF.【高分句型一】 Hepburn Won many awards because of her

efforts in this area.（描述最喜欢的人）I like her not only for her success in films but for her

efforts in charity work. 【高分句型二】（喜欢的原因）

【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。

36．某英语报社正在就"The person who I admire most"为题进行征文比赛．假设你的叔叔对你的学习生活影响非常大，你非常钦佩你的叔叔Mike．请你根据表格提供的有关叔叔的信息和要求写一篇文章向该报社投稿．

职业

品质

作家

有条理

勤奋

乐于助人

最爱的颜色

对我的帮助

红色

年龄

三十几岁

做坚持每日写作，偶尔熬夜

事有规划，物品摆放井井有条

经常为邻居做额外的工作

象征着……．

……． （举例说明）

注意：1．短文须包括所给内容要点，要求语句通顺、意思连贯；

2．省略号处作适当发挥；

3．词数90个左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数．

The person who I admire most

______I would like to talk about my Uncle Mike who I admire most．

【分析】【高分句型一】

He is glad to help others and often does extra work for neighbours．

他乐于帮助别人，经常为邻居做额外的工作．be glad to help others 乐于帮助别人，do extra

work for sb．为某人做额外的工作

【高分句型二】

He gave me some advice on how to learn English well．

他就如何学好英语给了我一些建议．give sb． advice on how to do sth． 给某人提如何做某事的建议

【解答】The person who I admire most

I would like to talk about my Uncle Mike who I admire most． He is a writer．（职业） He is

in his thirties．（年龄） He has many strong qualities． He is always organized and keeps

everything in order． He works hard and keeps writing every day． Sometimes he stays up

late． He is glad to help others and often does extra work for neighbours．【高分句型一】（品质） His favourite colour is red， because he thinks red represents power and strong

feelings．（最喜欢的颜色） When something worries me， I often turn to him．He always

listens to me and gives me some advice．Last term， I failed my English exam． He gave me

some advice on how to learn English well．【高分句型二】Later，I made great progress．（对

我的帮助）

【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务．

37．英语周报将举办以"My happy family"为题的演讲比赛，请你根据表格信息及英文提示写一篇符合逻辑的演讲稿．短文不少于40个词

人物

职业身份

年龄

爱好

loves

bikes

father

teacher

38

mother

cook

37

I

student

14

like

basketball

riding likes

reading

Hello，everyone．My name is Tim．I have a happy family．There are 3 people in it．They are

my father，my mother and I． ．

【分析】高分句型一

He likes riding a bike．此句是一般现在时的陈述句．运用短语like doing sth "喜欢做某事"，短语ride a bike "骑自行车"，此句可翻译为"他喜欢骑自行车．"

高分句型二

I love my family．此句是一般现在时的陈述句．运用短语love sth "爱某事"，此句可翻译为"我爱我家．"

【解答】My happy family

My name is Tim．I have a happy family．（要点一，介绍自己的姓名及有一个幸福的家庭．）There are 3 people in it．They are my father，my mother and I． My father is a

teacher． He is 38 years old．He likes riding a bike．（高分句型一） My mother is a

cook． She is 37 years old．She likes reading．I am a middle school student． I'm 14 years

old． I like playing basketball．（要点二，介绍自己的所有家庭成员的职业、年龄及爱好．）This is my family．I love my family．（高分句型二）（要点三，我的观点．）

【点评】本题是图表作文，能够根据图表提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务．

38．过去这一段时间我们身边的生活发生了很大的变化．李强是你班上的一名同学，这学期他变化了很多，学习进步很大，请根据下面表格提供的信息，以"Great Changes"为题用英语写一篇短文，向同学介绍李强的变化并简要说明理由．

过去

现在

花很多时间打电脑游戏

讨厌看书

发觉阅读有乐趣，每天看书一小时

喜欢看科学书，觉得有趣

图书馆借书

原因

从书中获得乐趣，获得知识

开创新世界

要求：1．必须包括表格中所有的相关信息，并适当发挥；

2．词数：100词左右；

3．不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等．

Great Changes

_______________．

【分析】【高分句型一】

He used to spend much time playing computer games他过去常常花大量的时间玩电脑游戏．

used to do sth 过去常常

【高分句型二】

It is helpful for us to have good reading habits对于我们来说有好的阅读习惯是有帮助的．

it is+adj+for sb+to do sth对某人来说做某事是怎么样的，it是形式主语，动词不定式做真正主语．

【解答】Great Changes

Li Qiang is one of my classmates．He has changed a lot this term．He used to spend much time

playing computer games．【高分句型一】He didn't like reading books．（过去）But now he

finds reading is fun．He reads for an hour every day．Science books are his favourite because he

thinks they are interesting．Usually he borrows books from the library．Sometimes he reads

books on the Internet．（现在）Why is he interested in reading books？Because he gets fun

from reading and he thinks reading can help him get much knowledge and open up a new world to

him．It is helpful for us to have good reading habits．【高分句型二】（原因）

【点评】考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题，确定文章的中心．注意文章文体、人称和时态．要求介绍．同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性．温馨提醒：考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等

39．假如你是Helen，在网上看到了Wildlife Protection Club （野生动物保护俱乐部）招募成员的广告．请认真阅读下面的广告，并根据邮件中的内容用英语写一封信给俱乐部主席，申请加入该俱乐部，请根据信息提示完成申请信．

Your information：

1．Who are you？ （a student，Grade 8）

2．What are you like？ （ patient，helpful）

3．What's your hobby？ （ like animals； ……）

4．Why would you like to join us？

5．How to contact （联系） you？ （TEL：0510﹣8555868；E﹣mail：Helen@163．com）

注意：1．词数80，信的开头和结尾已写好，不计入总词数；

2．信须包括所有要点，并适当发挥；

3．不得透露班级、学校、姓名等任何真实个人信息．

Dear Mr．Chairperson，

I read about Wildlife Protection Club yesterday．

I am looking forward to hearing from you．

Yours sincerely，

Helen

【分析】【高分句型一】

I will be very happy if I can be a member of your club．

if引导条件状语从句．这句话的意思：如果我能成为你们俱乐部的成员，我会很高兴．【高分句型二】

【高分句型二】

I am looking forward to hearing from you．

look forward to doing sth期待做某事．这句话的意思：我期待着收到你的来信．

【解答】Dear Mr．Chairperson，

I read about Wildlife Protection Club yesterday and I would like to join it．（点题）

I am a student of Grade 8．（年级） I am very patient and helpful．（性格） I loved animals

when I was very young．I would like to learn more about animals．And I hope to do something

for animals．（爱好）

I will be very happy if I can be a member of your club．【高分句型一】Please call me on 0510﹣8555868 or e﹣mail me at Helen@163．com．（联系方式）

I am looking forward to hearing from you．（期待）【高分句型二】

Yours sincerely，

Helen

【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务．

40．假如你是Millie，想要邀请你的朋友Alice来你的新家做客．用英语写一封邀请信．

地理位置

市中心公寓里，住在十九楼

社区

绿树环绕，……（再描写一个细节）

邻居友好，志愿者……（至少举一例）

路线

乘819路公共汽车在人民桥（Renming Bridge）下，往前；

第1个路口右转，然后你就会看见一个超市，我家就在超市的后面．

要 求：1）词数70左右．短文的开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数．

2）短文须包含所有要点，不要逐词翻译，可适当发挥，使短文连贯，通顺．

3）短文不得体现真实的人名，校名等相关信息．

Dear Alice，

I am very happy to invite you to my new home．

__________________________________________．

Welcome to my home．I think you'll have a good time here．

Yours，

Millie

【分析】【高分句型一】

The volunteers often help the elderly do some cleaning．志愿者经常帮助老人做一些清洁

help sb do sth帮助某人做某事．

【高分句型二】

I think you'll have a good time here．我认为你在这里会玩得很开心．

I think +宾语从句．

have a good time 玩的开心．

【解答】Dear Alice，

I am very happy to invite you to my new home．（点题）

My home is on the ninth floor in a flat in the city centre．（地理位置）In our community，there

are green trees everywhere．It's clean and tidy．You can smell the beautiful flowers and hear

birds sing in the morning．The neighbours are kind and helpful．The volunteers often help the

elderly do some cleaning．【高分句型一】We are like a big family．（社区）

You can come here by bus．Take the No．819 bus and get off at Renming Bridge．Go straight

ahead．

Turn right at the first corner and you will see a supermarket．My home is behind the

supermarket．You can't miss it!（路线）

Welcome to my home．I think you'll have a good time here．【高分句型二】（表示欢迎）

Yours，

Millie

【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务．

41．暑假即将到来，很多家长想让孩子参加暑假学习班，但学生对此意见不一．初二（1）班的学生就"学生是否应该上暑假学习班"展开了热烈的讨论，讨论结果如下．

注意：

1．词数90字左右．开头已给出，不计入总词数；

2．包含所有要点，可适当发挥；要求语句通顺、意思连贯、书写整洁；

3．文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称．

【分析】高分句型：

句型一：

Some believe that children should learn as much as possible since they have strong ability to grasp

new knowledge．一些人认为孩子们应该趁他们这个年纪学习能力很强的时候去多学习一些新知识．

have ability to do sth有能力做某事

as much as possible 尽可能多

句型二：

Kids learn more skills will be more flexible and smart than those who never attend training classes

in doing certain kinds of things．在做某种特定的事情的时候，那些拥有多重技能的孩子会比那些没有参加过培训课的小孩子更加灵活、聪明．

who引导的定语从句

training classes 培训课

【解答】答案：It is quite common phenomenon that many parents will bring their children to all

kinds of classes as long as their children have weekends or holidays．This kind of situation has

been hot discussed among public．Some people hold that children deserve to have play time as

much as possible．They have a lot of homework to do，and they don't have much time

left．（反对者的观点）

Some believe that children should learn as much as possible since they have strong ability to grasp

new knowledge．【高分句型一】Summer classes help them review and learn new content and

prepare for the new term．（赞成者的观点）

Standing on my point of view，I'm convinced that children should be sent to training class to

learn as much as possible so that they can be more brilliant．Firstly，training class can broaden

children's knowledge．For almost all children，they have very limited knowledge．But if they

are sent to training class，they can learn various knowledge of life．Thirdly，children can be

more outstanding in the future compared with those who don't attend training class．Kids learn

more skills will be more flexible and smart than those who never attend training classes in doing

certain kinds of things．【高分句型二】（我的观点）

All in all，sending kids to training classes will do a lot of good to children's future．

【点评】写作主要考查学生综合运用英语语言的能力，涉及学生的词汇量，正确运用单词的能力，对所学语法的掌握程度，能否按照英语习惯正确表达所要表达的意思的能力等等．

42．假如你叫王燕，看到小宠物主人俱乐部（the Young Pet Owners Club）正在招收新成员，很想参加；请根据下表格提供的信息，用英语写一份申请信，表达你的意愿并恳请俱乐部考虑和答复．

name

age

personality

other information

王燕

14

善良，乐于助人（上周送一迷路小男孩去警局，并陪他玩儿了两小时）

1．就读于第一中学，最喜欢生物

2．喜爱动物，有一只叫Anny的宠物兔，一天三次喂它吃胡萝卜

3．正在看一本如何照顾宠物的书

4．梦想将来当一名兽医（a doctor for

animals）

要求：

1．词数80左右，信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；

2．内容必须包括所有要点，不要逐字翻译，可适当发挥，使其连贯、通顺；

3．文章中不得出现真实的人名、地名、校名等相关信息．

June 25，2015

Dear Sir，

I read your poster yesterday，I'm writing to tell you I'd like to be a member of your club．

My name is Wang Yan． ．

I want to join your club because I want to know more about animals．I will be very happy if I can

become a new member of your club．You can call me on 0512一65436688．

Yours faithfully

Wang Yan．

【分析】高分句型：

句型一：

I'd appreciated it if you could possibly consider my application．如果你能考虑我的申请，我很感激．

if引导的条件状语从句

consider one's application考虑某人的申请

句型二：

I want to join your club because I want to know more about animals．我想加入你们的俱乐部因为我想了解更多关于动物的知识

because引导的原因状语从句

want to so sth想要做某事

【解答】答案：June 25，2015

Dear Sir，

I read your poster yesterday，I'm writing to tell you I'd like to be a member of your club．

My name is Wang Yan．I'm 14 years old． （年龄）I think I'm fit for the Young Pet Owners

Club，because I have worked as an English tutor before，which will help me do the job

better．（高分句型）I am very kind，I sent a lost boy to the police station last week and played

with him for two hours．（善良）I study at no.1 middle school and I like biology best．（喜欢生物）

I love animals．I have a pet rabbit named Anny．I feed her carrots three times a day．（喜爱动物）I am reading a book on how to care for pets．（正在看一本如何照顾宠物的书）My

dream is to be a doctor for animals．（梦想将来当一名兽医）

I think animals are our friends．I'd appreciated it if you could possibly consider my

application．【高分句型一】I want to join your club because I want to know more about

animals．【高分句型二】I will be very happy if I can become a new member of your club．You

can call me on 0512一65436688．

Yours faithfully

Wang Yan．

【点评】本篇写作需注意要求中所提供的要点，不可遗漏．需在平时积累相关的词汇，写作中注意语义通顺，符合逻辑关系．上下文之间可以适当使用连接词．如but，so，then等．

43．苏州国际旅游节即将在五月举办．假如你是李明，想要邀请南京的朋友王雷来你家做客．根据下面提供的信息，用英语写一封邀请信．

地理位置

社区

市中心公寓，住9楼，离观前街只有2公里

绿树环绕，干净整洁

邻居友好，乐于助人（至少举一例）

路线

乘火车从苏州火车站出来：左转进入人民路，往前；

第三个路口右转，你就会看到一个超市；我家就在超市的对面．

注意：（1）词数90左右．邀请信的开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数．

（2）邀请信须包括所有要点，不要逐词翻译，可适当发挥，使文章连贯、通顺．

（3）邀请信中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息．

Dear Wanglei，

I'm very happy to invite you to my new home．

Welcome to my home．I'm looking forward to meeting you soon．

Yours，Liming

【分析】【高分句型一】

We are lucky to live in a neighborhood like this．我们很幸运，生活在这样的社区．

be lucky to do sth幸运的做某事．

【高分句型二】

I'm looking forward to meeting you soon．我期待着尽快见到你．

look forward to doing sth期待做某事．

【解答】Dear Wanglei，

I am very happy to invite you to my new home．I live in a flat on the ninth floor in the city

center．It is only five kilometers away from the Guanqian Street．（地理位置）

There are many green trees around my neighborhood．It's clean and tidy here．The air is fresh，too．The neighbours are kind and helpful．The college volunteers often share their skills and

help us with different problems．We are lucky to live in a neighborhood like this．（社区）【高分句型一】

Let me tell you the way to my home．You can take the train．Get out from Suzhou Railway

Station．Turn left into Renmin Road and go straight on．Turn right at the third turning，and

you'll see a supermarket．My home is just opposite it． （路线）

Welcome to my home．I'm looking forward to meeting you soon．（期待）【高分句型二】

Yours，

Liming

【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务．

44．假如你是学校的小记者，日前对学校"最美志愿者"Amy进行了采访．请根据以下采访记录，用英语写一篇稿件，向读者介绍她的情况．

兴趣爱好

1．读书．每天约花一小时阅读．

2．旅游．去过中国西部地区．

感人事迹

1．贫困学生患重病，为其集资做手术．

2．发现女童辍学，联系政府帮助其复学．

未来计划

1．今年暑假：宣传环境保护，因为…（原因自拟）．

2．以后有机会时：…（内容自拟）

注意：1．词数90词左右．短文开头已写好，不计入总词数．

2．短文须包括所有要点，不要逐词翻译，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺．

3．短文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息．

Amy was presented the Most Beautiful Young Volunteer in our school． She likes

reading．When she was young，she read the four great classical Chinese novels．And she likes

travelling，too．She has visited many places in the west of our country．This helped her learn

more about the country．

Amy organized several activities to raise money fora boy from a poor family．The boy got a

serious disease．With Amy's support，the boy was cured after the operation．Last year，she

found a girl had to leave school，she wrote to the local government and helped the girl return to

school．

This summer，she decides to tell people to protect the environment because she finds the

environment is changing for the worse．If possible，she may take part in some charities to work

for more people．

She says she doesn't have as much spare time as before，but her life is more meaningful． ．

【分析】【高分句型一】

When she was young，she read the four great classical Chinese novels．当她小的时候，她读中国四大古典小说．

when引导时间状语从句．

【高分句型二】

This summer，she decides to tell people to protect the environment because she finds the

environment is changing for the worse．今年夏天，她决定告诉人们保护环境，因为她发现环境开始恶化．

decide to do sth开始做某事；because引导原因状语从句．

【解答】Amy was presented the Most Beautiful Young Volunteer in our school．She likes

reading．She spends an hour reading books every day．When she was young，she read the four

great classical Chinese novels． 【高分句型一】And she likes travelling，too．She has visited

many places in the west of our country．This helped her learn more about the country．（兴趣爱好）

Amy organized several activities to raise money for a boy from a poor family．The boy got a

serious disease．With Amy's support，the boy was cured after the operation．Last year，she

found a girl had to leave school，she wrote to the local government and helped the girl return to

school．（感人事迹）

This summer，she decides to tell people to protect the environment because she finds the

environment is changing for the worse．【高分句型二】If possible，she may take part in some

charities to work for more people．（未来计划）

She says she doesn't have as much spare time as before，but her life is more meaningful．（感受）

【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务．

45．根据中文和英文提示，写一封意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于50词的邮件．邮件的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数．所给提示词仅供选用．

注意：请不要写出你的校名和姓名，请不要抄写本试卷文章中的原句．

假设你叫李华，最近和自己的英国朋友Peter在谈论各自敬佩的人物，他在上封邮件中向你介绍了自己所敬佩的一位作家，他希望你也能向他介绍一位自己所敬佩的人．请根据他提出的以下问题给他回复一封邮件．

参考词汇：work hard；kind；helpful；responsible；role model

Who do you admire？（a writer/a sports player/your parent/your classmate/…）

What does/did he/she do？

Why do you admire him/her？

Hi!Peter，

Thanks for telling me about J．K．Rowling．She is really a great writer!

One of the people I admire a lot is my father．He is a history teacher at a middle school．He

loves his job and works very hard．To make his students interested in history，he makes a lot of

efforts to prepare each lesson．He is also patient and helpful to his students．

As for me，he is not only my father but also a good friend．Whenever I have problems，he is

the first person who offers me advice and encouragement．My father is my role model．He has

taught me to be kind，hardworking and responsible．

Yours，

Li Hua．

【分析】【高分句型一】

One of the people I admire a lot is my father．（我最敬佩的人物之一是我的父亲）

I admire是定语从句，修饰people，省略了who．

【高分句型二】

Whenever I have problems，he is the first person who offers me advice and

encouragement．（每当我遇到问题时，他都是第一个给我建议和鼓励的人）

whenever引导的时间状语从句．其中who引导的定语从句，修饰person．

【解答】Hi!Peter，

Thanks for telling me about J．K．Rowling．She is really a great writer!

One of the people I admire a lot is my father．【高分句型一】（我崇拜的人）He is a

history teacher at a middle school．（他的职业）He loves his job and works very hard．To

make his students interested in history，he makes a lot of efforts to prepare each lesson．He is

also patient and helpful to his students．

As for me，he is not only my father but also a good friend．Whenever I have problems，he is

the first person who offers me advice and encouragement．【高分句型二】

My father is my role model．He has taught me to be kind，hardworking and responsible．（为什么）

Yours，

Li Hua

【点评】在解答写作这类试题时，要根据短文的中心思想考虑如何开头、展开和结尾，设想几个承上启下的连词，将主要句型、关键词语草草记下，形成提纲，写时切忌结构分散，废话连篇，严重跑题．

46．我们周围有很多值得尊敬的人，家长，老师，朋友…你最尊敬的人是谁呢？

某英文报纸以"我最尊敬的人（The person I respect most）"为题进行征文，请你投稿．介绍一下你最尊敬的人是谁，你为什么尊敬他/她，你从他/她身上学到了什么．

提示词语：important，learn，help…

The person I respect most

My mother is the person I respect most．She plays an important role in my life，not only as a

mother but also as a friend．

As a mother，she takes good care of the family and she is never upset about my mistakes．She

works hard in the company．She's always warm﹣hearted and ready to help others．She sets a

good example to me．I have learned to work hard and respect people around．As a friend，she

knows a lot about me and gives me help whenever it's necessary．

My mother has a great influence on me and I respect her most．

【分析】高分句型一：

She ①plays an important role in my life，②not only as a mother but also as a friend．她在我的生活中起着重要的作用，不仅作为一个母亲，而且作为一个朋友．

①play an important role in 在…中起重要作用

②not only…but also…不但…而且…连接前后两个对等的成分

高分句型二：

①As a friend，she knows a lot about me and gives me help ②whenever it's necessary．作为一个朋友，每当必要的时候她很了解我并给我帮助．

①as介词，作为

②whenever引导的时间状语从句，每当…

【解答】One possible version：

The person I respect most

My mother is the person I respect most．She plays an important role in my life，not only as a

mother but also as a friend．【高分句型一】【我最尊敬的人是谁】

As a mother，she takes good care of the family and she is never upset about my mistakes．She

works hard in the company．She's always warm﹣hearted and ready to help others．She sets a

good example to me．I have learned to work hard and respect people around．As a friend，she

knows a lot about me and gives me help whenever it's necessary．【高分句型二】【尊敬的原因及从她身上学到了什么】

My mother has a great influence on me and I respect her most．

【点评】考生需根据所提供的信息提炼文章的写作主题，需了解写作要点及写作意图，仔细构思写作结构，平时注意积累词汇及语法知识．

47．"经历有好也有坏，每种经历都是收获．"由于防控疫情的需要，学校延期开学，同学们经历了一段特殊的学习生活．

某英文网站正在开展以"我的居家学习生活"为主题的征文活动．假如你是李华，请用英文写一篇短文投稿，谈谈你的居家学习生活以及你的收获．

提示词语：study，do exercise，housework，self﹣ disciplined （自律的）

提示问题：●What did you do when you stayed at home？

●What have you learned from this special experience？

．

【分析】【高分句型一】

We organized Wechat groups so that we shared the experience with each other．我们组织了微信小组，互相分享经验

so that引导目的状语从句．

【高分句型二】

We studied by watching video lectures．我们通过观看视频课程来学习．

by doing sth通过做某事．

【解答】My online learning at home

We had to stay at home because of the epidemic．（点题）

We had online lessons at home．We organized Wechat groups so that we shared the experience

with each other．【高分句型一】We studied by watching video lectures．【高分句型二】We

handed in our homework to the teacher by mobile phone or computer．I did exercise half an hour

every day to keep healthy．I also helped my mother with the housework．（在家做什么）

From this special experience，I have learned a lot．I have improved my learning ability．At the

same time，I became more self﹣ disciplined．（收获）

【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务．

48．从下面两个题目中任选一题，根据中文和英文提示，完成一篇不少于50词的文段写作．文中已给出内容不计入总词数．所给提示词语仅供选用．请不要写出你的校名和姓名．

假如你是李华，你们学校号召各班制作短视频展现同学们延期开学后的校园生活，并发布在学校网站上．你所在的小组负责制作你班的短视频．请你写一封邮件给你班交换生Peter，说明你们制作短视频的想法或构思，并告诉他所需准备的素材以及发送给你的时间．

提示词语： show， beautiful， safe， interview， photo

提示问题：●What's your idea for making the video？

●What would you like Peter to prepare？

●When should Peter send you the material？

Dear Peter，

We are going to make a video showing our school life after the reopening of our

school． ．

If there is anything more you want to know， please tell me．

Yours，

Li Hua

【分析】【高分句型一】

The video should show students how to stay away from the virus in school．这个视频应该向学生展示如何在学校远离病毒．

how to stay away from the virus 如何远离病毒，疑问词接不定式．

【高分句型二】

You'd better send me the materials by Friday．你最好在星期五之前把材料寄给我

had better do sth最好做某事．

【解答】Dear Peter，

We are going to make a video showing our school life after the reopening of our school．（点题）

I think it's a good idea．It can let parents know about their children's life in school．The video

should show students how to stay away from the virus in school． 【高分句型一】We'd better

make it into a movie．（我的想法）When the teachers are on duty， you have to take pictures

of them．You have to interview some students and parents．You should also prepare some

beautiful flowers．（让Peter准备什么）You'd better send me the materials by Friday．【高分句型二】（Peter寄材料的时间）

If there is anything more you want to know， please tell me．（总结全文）

Yours，

Li Hua

【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务．

49．题目②

初中三年的学校生活即将成为美好的回忆．回首三年时光，你有哪些收获？即将毕业，你有什么感受？

假如你是李华，你校英文校刊邀请你写一篇短文谈谈毕业之际的感想，内容包括你三年学校生活的收获以及你即将毕业的感受．

提示词语： knowledge， friend， memory， happy

提示问题：●What have you got during the past three years？

●How do you feel upon graduation？

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【分析】【高分句型一】

I used to be shy and had few friends．我过去很害羞，几乎没有朋友．

used to do sth过去常常做某事．

【高分句型二】

With the help of my English teacher， I have made great progress in English．

With the help of 在……的帮助下．

make great progress取得很大的进步．

【解答】Three years of junior high school life will soon become a happy memory． In the past

three years， I have changed a lot． I used to be shy and had few friends．【高分句型一】But

now I am happy and outgoing．Gradually，I made some good friends． I used to dislike

reading， but now I like reading very much． With the help of my English teacher， I have made

great progress in English．【高分句型二】（我的收获）

Now， I am very sad to leave my teachers and classmates．I think I'll miss them．I hope they

will be better in the future．（感受）

【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务．

50．根据所给中文要点，用英语写一篇80词左右的短文介绍你理想中的学校．要求语句通顺，意思连贯．要点：

早上9点开始上课，因此不用早起．

下午3点放学，放学后有很多时间进行课外活动．

吃午饭时可以和朋友们聊天或听音乐．

每天只有一小时的作业，可以花很多时间跟朋友们练习打棒球．

有很多伙伴愿意帮我辅导我的功课，他们都是我的偶像．

My ideal school

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【分析】【高分句型一】

I spend an hour on my homework every day．

我每天花一个小时做作业．spend…on…在…上花费…

【高分句型二】

We can spend a lot of time practicing baseball with your friends．

我们可以花很多时间和你的朋友练习棒球．spend…doing sth花费…做某事．

【解答】My ideal school

My ideal school is big and beautiful，with a library，a laboratory，a playground and so

on．（点题）My ideal school usually starts with morning exercises and starts at 9 o'clock，so

we don't have to get up early． The school day finishes at 3：00 p．m．There are all kinds of

activities after school．During lunch， we can chat with your friends or listen to music． I spend

an hour on my homework every day．【高分句型一】 We can spend a lot of time practicing

baseball with your friends．【高分句型二】Many partners would like to help me with my

homework． They are my idols．（具体介绍学校）

【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务．