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46. 没有受过高等教育的年轻人只能找到低技术的工作
正确的句子:Young people without tertiary education qualifications normally end up working
in low-skilled jobs.
我的句子:Young people without highbred没有这个单词 education can only get没有seek和find正式 low-skilled jobs.
本句没有受过高等教育可使用without做后置定语也可以使用who引导的定语从句
People who do not have tertiary education qualifications / receive an tertiary education(较正式)....
Tertiary education qualifications:高等教育 或(higher / further education)
Qualification 文凭(可数n)
Degree 学位 (postgraduate degree) certificate 证书(eg. 计算机二级)
Low-skilled 低技术的(洗车 清理花园类) (labour 没有young labour 的表达 有skilled
labour 这里的labour是不可数名词)
Skillful 擅长做…(尤其是需要特殊技能的)
Hi-tech / low-tech 高技术含量 / 低技术含量
找到工作:find jobs / find employment / seek jobs /seek employment /end up working(词伙)
End up doing sth 以...结束
Receive tertiary education qualifications 缺少an 且不应加 qualifications 或用have
tertiary education qualifications
改:Young people who do not have tertiary education qualifications (receive an tertiary
education) normally find low-skilled jobs.:
Without education(没有教育,不能体现个体,单个人) 语义不准确 没翻译出高等教育 应该用tertiary education qualifications
改:Young people without tertiary education qualifications normally find low-skilled jobs.
47. 一些人不支持转基因食品
正确的句子:Some people disapprove of genetically modified food.
我的句子:Genetically modified foods are not supported语义上没有disapprove好 by some
people
Genetically modified 转基因 adv 修饰adj eg. Environmentally friendly.环境友好型
Genetically engineered food 转基因食物 此处food不可数 不应加s
Disapprove (vi)of 反对 通常指事情本身是坏的。
Disapprove (vt)不同意
Support (agree and help)同意并帮助 若用do not support 不恰当 不同意和不支持意思相差较远
这句话是正确的
Object n / v
N. 可数 表示物品
V (vi)一般接to 表达 oppose,有disapprove of 意思
Objection UN. 反对 / objective adj 客观的 (主观的是subjective)n.目的
Support 为实义动词 一句话有两个动词! 且用词不准确 建议用disapprove
若想用do not support且表达出不好的意思=等于disapprove of 可后接从句解释,说对人身体不好,这样就可以一样了~
改:Some people do not support genetically modified food because it does harm to people’s
health.
48. 旅游景点竭力满足游客的需要和品味
正确的句子:Tourist spots endeavor to cater for tourists' tastes and needs.
我的句子:Tourist attractions do their best一般四六级才这么表达 to fulfil实现 visitors’
needs and tastes
旅游景点:Tourist spots / tourist attractions / tourist sites / places of interests
Endeavor (vi)to do sth 竭力,努力
Cater for 满足,迎合
或tailor to 满足别人的需求 或meet 或satisfy
游客:visitors / tourists 但不要用customers 顾客
Taste 和 need 应用复数,因为游客品味和需求是不同的
Demand 为经济学中的需求 是不可数n eg. Demand for housing 住房需求
Give priority to 重视 to 为介词 后接v-ing satisfy应改为satisfying 这里的travellers指经常旅行的人 和游客意思不一样
改:Tourist sites give priority to satisfying visitors’ needs and tastes:
People 所有格有问题 缺少’s
有生命 加’s 无生命 用the of 所属关系表示
改:Tourist spots make an effort to meet people’s needs and tastes.
49. 在竞争激烈的社会,有工作的人关心职业发展。
正确的句子:In a highly competitive society, working adults usually focus on career
advancement.
我的句子:In a highly competitive society, people with work中式表达 take care of=look after照顾 career development.
竞争激烈:highly(等于very) competitive 副词修饰形容词
Society 可数n 别裸奔
有工作的人:Working adults / people
关注:concentrate on / pay attention to (to是介词)/ focus on (介词) 后接n 不要直接接动词原形
往往:normally / usually
Always 为一直都保持一个状态不改变 (慎用)
Job/ career prospects 职业前景(词伙)prospect在这里是将来成功的机会 所以这里的prospect是复数形式
Job opportunities 工作机会 / career advancement / career development 职业发展或前景(词伙)
In the fierce competition 表达较奇怪 要么intense competition 要么 in the fierce
competition.
Concern about 不准确 concern一般用法为:concern yourself about sb 此句应用concentrate on / pay attention to / focus on
改:In a highly competitive society, working people give priority to优先考虑 take care of
career development.
Adults working 表达不对 是 working adults
改:In a highly competitive society, working people pay attention to career development.
50. 审美观是因文化而异的。
正确的句子:Perception of beauty differs from culture to culture.
我的句子:Perception of beauty is different because of different cultures. 可以这么写 但是比较啰嗦
the sense of beauty美感
Perception 感知
审美观: Perception of beauty
Differ from / vary from不同(动词)
Culture 表示不同文化可数n
表示一种文化时用单数 eg. 西方文化
From A to B, A B不同,两者都用单数
挨家挨户 from house to house
Result from 由什么导致
Result in 导致
Aesthetics为美学的意思
Vary 为动词 一句有两个动词
From culture语意表达不准确
改:Perception of beauty is different from culture to culture.
51. 因为费用的下降,航空最近几十年发展得很快。
正确的句子:Because of low-cost carriers, the aviation industry has developed at an astounding
pace over the past decades.
我的句子: The aviation industry/sector has developed sharply during these recent decades
because of the decline in the cost of carriers.
费用下降快,指成本变低:cost
Because of +名词短语表原因状语
航空业:The aviation industry / sector 可数n
Developed at an outstanding pace 发展快 (n)
本句应用完成时,表持续性动作,产生结果或影响
Low-cost carriers 低成本,也可以用 because of the decrease(n) in the cost of carriers.
Outstanding adj 很令人惊讶 修饰pace
At your own pace 自己的步伐
Keep pace with 与…..保持速度上的一致。
Over / during the past decades 在过去的几十年里
Airport 是飞机场的意思 the area of airport 表达不准确 应该用the aviation industry
In those decades 没有这种表达 ,可用 Past decades / in the past several years
Fee 费用 eg. tuition fee学费 / admission fee门票费
Decrease 表示在某方面的下降用in 表示...的下降 用of
改:The aviation industry has developed at an astounding pace during the past decades because
of the decrease in the cost of carriers.
Expense 指花费 不指成本
At an astounding speed 指速度,eg at a speed of 50km/h 改为pace
改:The aviation industry has developed at an astounding pace during the past decades because
of the decrease in the cost of carriers.
Because of 后接名词或名词词组
Air industry不准确 一般用airline industry 或aviation industry
改:The airline industry has developed fast in recent decades because of the decrease in the
cost of carriers.
52. 动物实验有时候不能够检验出药物的不良副作用。
正确的句子:Animal experiments sometimes fail to detect the undesirable side effects of drugs.
我的句子:Animal experiments sometimes cannot test和examine意思一样 强调过程 the
side-effect是side effect of the medicine.
动物实验:Animal experiments / tests / testing / experimentation
不能够:fail to do sth / not able to do sth / cannot
只有do not 分开写
副作用 side effects (可数名词)
检测 : detect 指的是检测的结果(此处用) examine指检查的过程 和test一样
入学考试 :an entrance examination
不良:Undesirable 不想要的副作用 或者harmful 或者 adverse 有害的
有益的:beneficial 好的副作用
学医的同学说 adverse effects表示患者的不良反应 大家就当扩展学习了
Sometime 合在一起表示不确定的一段时间 不合适 本句为有时
Can not 要一起写
Check 是简单的检查 check in表示登记入住 check out表示退房
Chemicals 表示化学,指简单的化学物 可用drug or medicine
改: Animal experiments sometimes fail to detect the undesirable side effects of the medicine.
Cannot 才是正确写法
被动语态Be done 缺少be动词
Medicine 可数或者不可数n
改:Sometimes,the side effect of the medicine cannot be detected by animal experiments..
53. 非法捕杀导致某些动物的灭亡。
正确的句子: Some animals have died out because of illegal hunting
我的句子:Illegal hunting causes the extinction of some animals.
Illegal hunting has led to the extinction of some animals.也可以
或者动名词做主语
Lead to / cause the extinction of some animals
灭绝:Die out / in danger / Become extinct / the extinction of endanger是使...危险的意思eg.
Endanger one’s life
Extinct adj Become extinct 没有 go extinct
非法捕猎:hunting illegally / illegal hunting
Result in / lead to导致
Extinction 前加the
改:Illegal hunting leads to the extinction of some animals.
主谓不一致 应该用 has
改:Illegal hunting has led to some animals’ extinction.
一句话两个谓语动词
Cause 用的不准确 没有cause sb do sth!只有cause sb/sth to do sth.
改:Illegal hunting leads to the extinction of some animals.
54. 电脑对人交流技能的影响随着年龄变化。
正确的句子:
The impact of computers on communication skills varies across ages.
我的句子:The effect of computers on people’s communication skills varies with the age
changing.没有这种表达
Have an impact on对什么有影响
电脑的影响 the impact of computer
人类活动对环境的影响:the impact of human activities on the environment
交流技能:communication skills
Change改变 一个改变成另一个 不强调变化
Age 表年龄时既可数也不可数
With age 指随着一个人年龄增长
Across ages 不同人的年龄变化
As age changed 时态不对
Change指改变 但年龄没法改变
改:The impact of computers on communication skills varies across ages.
55. 很多女孩都不愿意在男人居多的行业里(male-dominated world)找工作。
正确的句子:Many girls are not willing to seek employment in a male-dominated world.
我的句子:A large number of girls are not willing to find jobs in a male-dominated world.
男性居多的行业: male-dominated world(field/ industry) 词伙 world 可数n 别裸奔
一般世界只有一个 in a … world
男性主导的专业male-dominated profession
不愿意:be unwilling to do / are not willing to do / be reluctant to
寻求工作机会:in search of job opportunities
Seldom 频度副词 指不经常做某事
改:Many girls are not willing to seek employment in a male-dominated world
56. 学校的主要功能是给下一代灌输知识(impart knowledge)。
正确的句子:The main function of schools is to impart knowledge to the next generation.
我的句子:The main function of schools is to impart knowledge to the next generation
本句主系表结构
Be to do 表目的或者将来 也有计划好要做的事情的意思
Main function(n)主要的功能
The machine functions(vt) well 机器运转的很好
Impart sth to sb (to为介词,to 后内容要加上,不可省略,要完整)
下一代:The future generation / the next generation / the younger generation
前几代:earlier generations
School 只有在 at school 这种词组搭配下才可裸奔 其余都不可以!
功能:function 此处不能用task / responsibility 语意不准确
改:The main function of schools is to impart knowledge to the next generation.
57. 艺术不属于学校的主科。
正确的句子:The arts are not among core subject areas at school.
我的句子:Arts are not regarded as不被认为的意思 the major subject错误 at school
Art艺术
Arts 科目 非理科的总称(文科)
科目 the arts 或者arts 不要the art / art
At school 可以裸奔 在校 in the school 指的是在这所学校里但不知道干什么(此处不适用)
不属于:belong (vi 物品的属于) 搭配是belong to
主科:core subject(词伙) classes (有班级意)/ courses 表示课程的意思(此处不适用)
Among 在….之间 among …areas 在什么领域
也可以改成:The arts are not core subjects.
Are not belong to 错误
Main subject 表达错误 应该用core subject
不能说学校的主科 f 结构用错地方
改:Arts are not core subjects at school.
Class 表示班级或课程 美式 一般用英式 course 此处有词伙 core subject
Belong 指物品的属于 此处不太适用 太直译
改:Arts are not among core subject areas at school.
58. 因为不够明朗的经济前景(economic outlook),很多公司不可能招聘新的职员。
正确的句子:Because of the uncertainty about the economic outlook, many companies are
unlikely to recruit new employees.
我的句子:Because of the blurry模糊的意思 economic outlook, a large number of companies
are not likely to hire new employees.
Be unlikely to do不太可能做 表示可能性
Can在肯定时表达可能性
Cannot指不能够 没有可能性
经济前景 economic outlook(词伙)
Outlook 表示对生活,对世界的态度 为可数n eg. positive outlooks
表示未来会发生的事时,通常为单数 eg. financial outlook / political outlook / economic
outlook
此处为不晴朗的前景(黯淡)gloomy economic outlook
招聘:hire / recruit
Unclear 指理解上的不清晰 不指不明朗
Are not employ 错误 两个谓语动词且不需用被动
Employ 指人被聘用为什么 eg. She is employed as a secretary.
改:Because of the gloomy economic outlook, many companies are not likely to recruit new
employees.
Obvious 表示明显 obviously 明显地 不表示明朗
改:Because of the gloomy economic outlook, many companies do not recruit new employees.
Unbright 没有这个单词
Cannot表示不能够 语意不对
改:Because of the gloomy economic outlook, many companies are not likely to recruit new
employees
59. 空运产生很多的温室气体。
正确的句子:Air freight is likely to create enormous(数量庞大) greenhouse gases
我的句子:Air transportation may create enormous greenhouse gases.
空运: air freight / air transport(英式) / air transportation(美式) / air travel / cargo airlines
Enormous 大量 可修饰可数或不可数n
温室气体 : greenhouse gases 不止一种气体故加es 但本质上gas不可数 和government
funds本质一样 修饰温室气体要用修饰不可数名词的词 因为本质还是不可数 eg. A
large amount of. 前面不能用number
天然气:nature gas 只有一种气体
没有fly transportation 这种表达
Greenhouse gas gas应加es
改:Air freight has produced a large amount of greenhouse gases.
主谓不一致
Amount of 前面加an amount of
Gas 变复数
改: Air freight produces a large amount of greenhouse gases.
60. 孩子很有可能有行为的问题。
正确的句子:Some children are likely to have behavioural problems.
我的句子:Children are likely to have behavioral problems
Be likely to have / may have / can have 都表示一种可能性
行为问题:behavior / behavioral problems
两个动词 正确的表达是 it is possible for children
这是it is 做形式主语 真正的主语是后面的动词不定式
改:it is possible for children to have behavioral problems
Get into trouble 有麻烦
Behavior 行为不可数 没有复数 不能加s
改:Some children are likely to have behavioural problems.
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